awesome story! i hope u update soon! ^_^

OAH! NUH!! You can't stop now, continue, continue!
Okay, so I really don't care about Jim, but anyway, I *demand* MORE!! This story is great!!
Uh, I mean... uhm... pwetty pwetty pwease? *makes puppy dog eyes*

I am in love with your story, and I love how you write Jim and Doppler's nephew...who is so not a Gary Stue. Please continue!

Interesting. Not bad writing, but not stellar either (Course, I’m also pathetically critical.). Your segueway use is really quite clever, but it seems a tad overused. Still, you should consider continuing this story at some point.

Please update soon! Great story and poor Jim!

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze aka Shadow and Mist

O_O Oh no! He got shot! D: Keep up the good work though! -thumbs up-

Gah!

Okay. I'm done now.

Very nice! I absolutely love your writing style-- especially having the characters finish each others' thoughts and sentences. This is both extremely well-written extremely entertaining.

But... You haven't updated in over two years. I perfectly understand if you've decided to discontinue this; you have every right. But would you at least leave a note in your profile or something?

Once again, you are a very talented writer.

~Sugarpony

Aww man, this fic is really good. Please tell me you're still going to finish it...

LMAO! I'm SO proud of you for not making this a Jim-falls-in-love-with-Mary-Sue fic! Lets hope it stays that way, and even if you add some romance, that it wont be cliche~ *adds to faves*

Please Update soon...I'm dying to find out what happens later on!

This is so good! Why haven't you updated?? Please update soon, K? I've been reading this fic ever since you started it, then my comp crashed, so I never got to read this chap till now, and I really want to know what happened!

I LOVE THIS FIC! Please update really soon, I wanna know what happened to Jim! *Cuddles a Jim Plushie* Pwease??

Excellent! brillant! I cant explain how wonderful this Fanfic is! I, Ive run out of words to express how wonderful this manificent piece of work is! It's...it's...oh man I need to increase my vocab! ^^...Keep it up! PLEASE!

Please keep going! I love this Fic, and I think you should keep at it

*Poke* Hey...*Poke Poke* Hey you! *Poke Poke Poke* Write more stuff and they will read! Something to think about...