You have a great story here. But please be more originall with the insults.

I remember the film of Kenneth Branagh and it was a real dialectic battle.

So the last part of the chapter is good until the:
"Idiot."
"Tomboy."
"Pervert!"
"Sexless!"
"Jerk!!"

I will like if it can be more original. I love things as:

"Well, I'm glad I managed to save the female race from a fate worse than death!"
"Oh, so you stopped trying to cook?"

Ironic and Sarcastic. I know that it is a hard work.

Good Luck.

Kinai.

Hello! First off, I'd like to thank you for revieing my fic! *bows happily* It make me so happy to hear reviews like yours.
Now, I'd also like to say that this was a terrific fic. I'd love to read more. You're a pretty good author yourself, so don't get too down when you get flames,k? ^.^
Take any suggestions into mind, but don't change your fics just to make one person happier. if you like it the way it is, then keep it that way.
Good luck on future stories & I'll make sure to check them out! ~.^
~Kyoko (aka NekoRanma13)
p.s. do me a favor & review some of my other stories, k? ^.^'

You just have to continue this fic. I just love Much Ado About Nothing.

Great Story. I can't wait until the next chapter

I like this. Being a lover of Shakespeare and Much Ado About Nothing - the movie is great, by the way - I like seeing a Ranma fic based on it. It's a perfect match! ^_~

Hiya people! Well, first of all, I'd like to apoligize to everyone for the review with my name. My friend decided to hiijack my account for a few minutes and write a review, since I was being annoying and asking everyone I knew to review me... yeah, I have no life...

Anyways, tiney, kiddo, you know I'm gonna keep on advirtising for you, but don't flatter yourself thinking I'm doing it for you! It's purely a selfish trait of mine that REALLY WANTS TO WRITE A REVIEW! Still, glad you liked the fic! ^-^

Eeee! Kalio Halos and Alia-chan, two of my favorites reviewing lil' old ME! *sniffs* I feel so loved... and yeah, I totally agree. The movie was absolutely hilarious. :P Kenneth Branagh did a REALLY good job! Yeah, I always thought the Ranma characters just sorta slide into certain roles in Much Ado... and those that don't I can mix and match!

Oooo, if you haven't read or seen it Kalio, you should really track down a copy of either the movie or the play! so anyways, thank you all so much for reviewing me!

-Erie/Maki

it was good evan though i made it myself.

Much Ado About Nothing is my favorite Shakespeare play of all time. I have the movie with Emma Tompson and Denzel Washington in it. God.. it's soo funny. I've always compared Ranma and Akane's relationship to that of Benedicts and Beatrice's. In fact.. I was mulling over writing my own like this. But reading them is soooo much better than writing.
I hope you decide to continue this.

Hee I like it. I've never actually read MAAN, so this will be interesting (my a.p. lit teacher would jump with a copy, i'm sure if she knew i haven't read it...) Anyway, I thought I should definitely review you since you've been so kinda as to review me. ^.^ happy ficcing!

Well, I think that this was good. I think you should advertise more for me lol j/k!
I like the end when nabiki said her little smart aleck(sorry if I spelt that wrong) statement! I like the fight lol they never change. AU's usually scare me but I love this Shakesperian play!