Awwww tear, this chapter was so touching lol. Great work.

wow this is a sort of twist that wasn't expected. so sesshomaru is in love with kagome but he doesn't know it and thinks its a spell of some sort? inuyasha is going to claim that sesshomaru has no honor seeing as he pretended to have deep feelings for kagome but in the end was only using her to gain the tetsuiga. what will kagome do now that she's starting to remember? will she remember more when she removes the other earing is it already gone but she still can't remember everything? what will naraku do when he wakes up only to find kagome gone and her earing there on the bed knowing what that must mean for him?

update soon onegai

ja ne

this is a great story, I wish you could write more.

So what happens next?

UPDATE!

I like the story.

cool

short, but good! can't wait to read the rest!

i LOVEDit. More people should write about things like this. It was awesome.

Great story line going

However there are few things that you can do to improve your writing...

for example: character now are kind of somewhat OOC

and also show don't tell.

Proof read... there are few grammar errors

show the story on the character's action and thoughts

don't tried to explain their actions and thought

more details - always help...

keep on the great works and hopefully you'll improve.

good job with the poem

Great story so far! :) can't wait til i finish.

Ok The Suspense is killing me so update soon or I'll be dead and I won't be able to read any more ( Pretends to faint for dramatic affect ) Just kidding but please do update soon

Hope you update soon...

It's very interesting, Good job

Continue soon Please and thank you