Nng Im not too happy about the ending. The visit yes- and teh recognision yes- but the story part- not really. IF its was jsut for him to read than maybe. *shrug* Giveing my opinion- sorry if I offended. =(

Wonderful job. =) One more chapter to go but it seems like a nice fitting ending as it is.

Ari chan

I've liked this chapter best. Keep it up.

Ari han

Cute. It seems that so much info is leaking out. You'd think everyone would be clueless about it. Lol.

Ari chan

Nice job. It doesnt seem quite like Megumi to break down like that but I am happy that he found some ease. As well as Im happy that you slept rurouni correctly. XD

ARi chan

Lol. Cute. Well said. =)

Ari chan

That was alright. I understand that Tomoe keeps her true thoughts in her diary but it seems a bit too childish of her- at least the writing. She always seemed a bit more mature than that. Sorry. =/ Other that the writing I apprciate your effort and love the story plot- I will keep on reading on. =)

Ari chan

Wonderful job. They only thing I'd change is your spelling on ronin. Its acutally spelt as rurouni. Other than that- nice job. =)

Ari chan

Wonderful job! =) I always liked Kenshin's relationship with his father in law, whether he knew it or not (That he was his father in law). Ive always wanted to see an extention of it. Lol.

Ari chan

That really was a touching tale... He wasn't really searching for family in the end, he was searching for truth.

i really like your stories! they really are wonderfully written! thanks for writing and posting these!

*~tsukiko~*

Very good! That was really sweet and I sincerly enjoyed reading about Tomoe's father. It would have been lovely for Kenshin and Tomoe's father to sit down and have a real heart to heart but it's just as nice this way too because they both know what Tomoe's father did for Kenshin.

Lovely job overall and it seems I've finally finished reading all your tales for now but I do have you on author alert so I'm definately hankering for more. ^_^

Love Randa*

OMGSH! That was so good! I don't even know what to say... wow, that's just... wow omgsh, I can't express it in words!

This was so great! I can't believe I haven't read it before (I held out for this long simply because I haven't read past volume 16 of the manga and I was heeding your spoiler warnings). This was a great story to end summer with, and I loved every minute of it, though Oibore's initial near-miss attempts to find Kenshin almost drove me crazy. I almost wish you'd write a sequel so we can find out what Oibore ended up saying to Enishi, but the epilogue and Kenshin's reaction to the book of 'legends' more than made up for it.

Excellent work, as ever! Say 'Hi' to Co-conspirator for me!

Wow, this chapter was great. Really funny!

Dear Ken-san looked sick.

That really made me laugh.

Heh, that book was really good! Someon ought to make a fanfic of his crazy legends...

"’During the Bakumatsu,’" he read, "’there was one name above all others that struck fear into the hearts of those living in Kyoto—Hitokiri Battousai. He has been called a god or a demon not of this world, who had eyes that burned with the fires of hell and could bring lightening down from the sky with a stroke of his katana.’"

Kenshin spit out his tea at those words.

That was a funny part as well...

Keep up the great work!