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| VeltaIO 2005-01-13 ch 5,  | abuseHow sweet. Lots of fun. A nice lighthearted change of pace. |
| giveGodtheglory 2003-08-04 ch 5, | abuseSweet! Thanks. God bless. < P.S. Write some more about Erica? |
| Go10 2003-08-03 ch 5, | abuseNice story..nice and sweet... |
| smoove 2002-12-26 ch 5, anon. | abusenice story, keep going |
| Nicholas 2002-12-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh, I loved this story! I so hope that this happy ending will come true for Pete and MJ in the comics,as it has in your story. Please write another tale - maybe for Valentine's Day.... |
| Appreciative Reader 2002-12-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseVery nicely done! I love happy endings and I agree that Peter deserves one now and then. Thanks for 'gifting' us with your story-telling talents. |
| Spidermanfan 2002-12-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseI think i will be having the sore fae tomwwer. That was soooooo butifuyl I love it. Best hrismtas Perstant ever. Thank you so much. It was a very happy ending! HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE |
| Spidermanfan 2002-12-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseO.k. I understand! This is comic based. Thank you.!! I was really lost. You are doing great! I love this story and I know Christmas is in 4 days and all but do you think you could finsh the story by then. 1 more chapter! and long! PLEASE that would be the best Chrstmas perstant ever! since my mom and dad can't get me anything. We'll short on money this year. I don't get any toys ar music this year so can you please make the last Chapter! 1: This is very funny yet seciouse. I like 2: You are updating very fast and I like that! 3: You are doing longer Chapters Thank you 4: DON"T LET HER HAVE HER BABY IN A ELEVORTER! 5: Have a very merry Christmas |
| Spidermanfan 2002-12-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseSTOP LEAVING CLIFF HANGERS! you have to stop doing that. It is getting on my nevers cause you don't update for a long time! good story thou |
| Spidermanfan 2002-12-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseO.k. This could be because I missed Part of it. (I skiped the auntmay Part in this chapter) bUT m.J Has never had a baby. Was that the other girl? Well Anyway Spider-man better save her and Get her to a hosaplitl Because I know He dosn't want to see Her give brith. My Dad didn't want to see my mom have me, But then My mom made him or she thrithen him to die. Well Make more k. This is getting really good. I like the plot here! Dose M.J know Peter is Spider-man But Peter dosn't know she knows that he dosn't know? O.k. That was confusing! Well I really like it The whole Plot is great just a cople of chages 1: Make longer Chapters! No one like's short Chapters Trust me 2: Make sure after the elevtor that you sictk to the plot. Here's some ideas M.J and Spider-man talk a little after words. Lie romice stuff But no Revling idiate let go that! Keep up the good work. Longer Chapters and No cliff Hanggers! Jenny Coulbourne |
| Sheba 2002-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat! It's nice to read a story set in the current comic-verse and not the movie-verse, for a change of pace. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. |
| Zaz 2002-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice one.. Continue? Please? /Patetic weak voice |
| Challenger1 2002-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it, keep going.I like the scene where his spider sense warns him about the ice, very realistic. I like when May says, "Don’t be cheeky, young man. I can still wallop you good with this!" 8) |
2002-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool very neat. Spide-man has to sve the day. He better save the day! Anut may. who cares right now M.J and A woman in labor is stuck in a elavtore. Upadte |