a sad story. can't believe she died. please update soon

awww! This is so sad. One of those stories that drawls tears from me!

AWESOME STORY SAD BUT AWESOME

Awwww. That's so sad!

“I know, since we’re hockey players let’s sing ‘All I want for Christmas is my two front teeth’.” Lol. I luv that line.

This story is so sad/sweet/sumtin else I can't think at the moment. Update soon!

Jen

oh that's so sad! the first part was great, i already told you, but this is *really* sad! and really good, too. but sad! oh, poor marly, poor guy, poor everyone...*sob sniffle sob*

awww thats so sad!

OH MY GOSH, that was sad! I almost cried lol. That was really powerful, I'm really glad you did another chapter!

That was nice but too short. You coulda gone into a little more detail about the Ducks' visits with Marly. Very sweet story though.

That was so sad, but i loved it! Keep up the good work!

Oh that was sad! :( It was really good though, maybe a bit quick, but still good. :) Is Guy your fave? He's mine too. :)

That is sooo sad! She died! ::sob:: Other than that, it's a really good, sad story.

Actually, even though Marly died, it's still a really good story. Write another

chapter or sumtin! Just finish it, please don't leave it like that!

Jen and Diane

Aww, that was sweet...but sad!

huh? wha was that?

it was a good attempt and christmas story writing. but that was kinda confusing, i have to say.