 sanzo-reload 3/10/06 . chapter 19This maybe too late but who cares.. Your story rocks.. There.. I just had to say it. I almost cry when I read the ending. It's so beautiful.
Thanks for writing such a lovely story.. |
 Neutralside 8/15/04 . chapter 19Wow, an enjoyable fic with a female OC who ends up with one of the Weiss guys, AND it's told in first person. *claps* Do write more on her if an idea ever comes to you. |
 Enerim 3/28/03 . chapter 1its good!please continue |
 Lady Light 3/23/03 . chapter 19WHE! LOVED IT! Please write more like this. * Lady Light |
 Clue 10/22/02 . chapter 14 OMG...I LOVE THIS! The first time I read it was a while ago..and then it hit me the other day that I never put it in my favorites or anything...so for the past to days I have been on a frantic search to find this! You are an amazing writer and have a wonderful imgination!
Please write more...!
In my view, I don't think this NEEDS to be improved. You put feeling and truth into your story...Its like I'm there...or at least I would like to be. You can only get even better with your skills. |
 Ed 7/22/02 . chapter 19 Oh my god! That was awesome! This is the best fic I have read yet(don't get too excited though I've only been on for 6 months)! But it is the best! Great job, maybe you can write a sequal or something(that is if this one is over). |
 Kurai Yoshitaru 6/10/02 . chapter 1 Hello. I this fic!
Damn,it is sooooooooooooo good. And it's a complete story,that's what I like about that!
Dude, I hope to become a good author. Not like you 'cause your probably going to be all
like,
"Kurai is such a suck-up-ditz"
so i'm just gonna say FANTASTIC STORY!
*Kurai |
 MChan4 6/7/02 . chapter 19I first saw this fic on Anime-genesis.com and I can say it's a nice fic. |
 BrainDamage 3/3/02 . chapter 19I think this was one of the best fics I ever read.And finally someone tought that the guys should love girls not eachother.That was one of the reasons I liked it.But the girl stayed with Ran or not? I hope (you) she did.Great story,you should get an award for it.One day i hope I could write like you. |
 Omikun 6/24/01 . chapter 19 i really enjoyed your fic. please write more! |
 Y. F. Fox 5/11/01 . chapter 4THIS FIC ROCKS! And I'm gonna tell u why, darling.
First off: This story is a non-yaoi. I'm not against yaoi, I've read many. But, I do not like yaoi when I know for fact that the series never at all hinted it. I know their only fan fic's, my problem is that there are to many yaoi fics and not enough non-yaoi. I want there to be both, sadly I don't think that's gonna happen? I thank you for writing a non-yaoi.
Second: I'm glad that you did Ran/Aya. He's my favorite guy out of weibi. I LOVE HIM! I have a thing for cold, calm guys. HE'S MINE! LOL
Third: You didn't do a Mary Sue. I'M SO HAPPY! You also didn't make the female character too strong, like she is the best assassin or to pretty, like a goddess, AKA/Mary Sue. I hate May Sue's, unless their humor, then I love them.
Last but not least: You kept the guys true to their character's. I have all the weibi tapes, this makes me an expert. *evil wink* You written the personalities true to thier form. In some areas u went off the track, but u got right back on afterwards, so no complaint. KEEP IT UP!
fox |
 bucue plush 4/21/01 . chapter 19I never knew I'd be finding myself up until midnight reading this... though it's hell for me trying to get a hold on more WK fansubs, it never kept me from enjoying this fic fully. _ And though I'm no expert at reviewing, I can say that I'd be looking forward to a sequel or continuation in the future. |
 jambery 3/13/01 . chapter 17 This was a great story! I really enjoyed it!
The only thing is marijuana is not *supposed* to be addictive . . . it would be much more believable if you made it a harder drug like mesc or heroin. :)
Good job! |
 ryoko 2/7/01 . chapter 17 wahhhhh...i want more! How bout a sequal?...it was sooo long, but really good...i even printed it out so i could read it at skool...lol...my teachers yelled at me big time...n e ways keep writtin...your fics are awesome! bai |
 ryoko 2/7/01 . chapter 1 I love your story!...continue pleeze! |