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| A. Nonymous III, esq 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abuseHihi. Me here. Yes, you know ME... I liked it. Even though you said you had writers' block, it sounds SO like Tifa, and I think this was great for her POV. It's just I think you might need to brush up on some grammar (GRAMMAR FREAK! I'M SORRY!), but it's really not a big problem. Only evil people like Ferrix do stuff like flame for slight grammar flaws. It's hardly noticeable, anyway. ^^ I hope this cheers you up, because you know how much I love you and your writing. |
| Cloud-Bahamut 2003-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWell this was pretty good. I'm gonna go read some of your other stuff now |
| tama-chan-lover 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abuseNot bad! not bad at all! Real nice feeling to it! I salute you in being able to make such a good fic wiht writers block. I can't write poems at all . I get too... dramatic I guess. I wrote a song ifc one time but then someone told me they wern't allowed so i took it off.I would your others, but my head hurst and I don't have enough time because I use the internet and write my stories at school.yeah it sucks i don't have a computer. Well good job! I prefer Yuffie over Tifa, but thats just me! If you want to read a semi-good ff 7 fic read my other story. Later! buh-byee! |
| Summoner Hirelena 2003-02-18 ch 1, | abuseaw i loved it! Thats 2 kawaii, i think Tifa is the coolest FF Charc. so this is so like her. Its sad though she died at the end. ^_^ ut i liked it |
| Dark Threnody 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abuseKinda poetic!Definitely a speech of honor.For having writer's block this is pretty good.You should make anather oath for someone else in FF7! |
| MaryJay 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseCOOOL! I loved the way you formatted it. Sounds just like Tifa. =) |
| Ann 2002-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great. I normally not read poem or poetry but I like this one. Love the way you write about Tifa. She is my most favorite chapacter of all time. |