You have a sick mind. I love this.

This works very well. You've got the insane clown actually make sense of his own psychotic world. I think this is how he would sound to himself in his internal ramblings. There is enough funny stuff, but mixed wiht just the right amount of insanity to make you see how dangerous he is. Well done!

Cool story ! (diary?)

Internally you rate this piece an 'R', which it deserves, but the site lists it as 'PG'. Just something you might want to fix.