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| Yvaughn 2007-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! Wonderfully in-character for Jayne especially! My favorite "Rayne" is when both River and Jayne seem like the River and Jayne I already KNOW, and you did that. Thanks! |
| Indigo 2005-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, very nice. I think this is one of the best J/R fics here. I particularly liked River's "taming" of Jayne:) *skips off to Syn's profile to read more stories* |
| whereistruth 2005-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseCan't really blame the girl, you know. Wonderful story, very in character. |
| Cimmera1 2004-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME STORY! The imagery is to die for! Good job! |
| Icy Flame 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well written. I enjoyed reading this! You have a grreat style. Those two are just so...adorable together! Wonderful fic! *grins* *waves* Later yo, Icy |
| Kai 2002-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Excellent* writing. Of the few J/R fics I've read the approach is always similar: their attraction is based on a certain innocence. But you've taken a different direction by allowing River take the initiative. I'd love to see if you take this further! Kudos. |
| KikiDiki 2002-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abusewow i kinda prefered KayleeJayne to riverJayne but now i think i've been converted. that was some good stuff |
| Carolyn 2002-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally, really good. You captured them both perfectly. Please, please, please write more R/J, nobody does them justice and now Joss isn't going to get the chance either. Maybe something R-rated? (she says hopefully) |
| Rhythm 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOoooh. Nice continuity with the apples, nice characterization of River. I'm impressed, and will be on the lookout for more. |
| Annabelle Crane 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI love River/Jayne! Write more soon!!!!! PLEASE! |
| j.sharpe 2002-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI want more!! Give me more!!! I'll beg... |
| Meg 2002-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood God! This fic is incredible!! I love the way you write J/R, you have them down so perfectly. And it was really interesting to see it from River's POV, she's tough but you make it looks so simple. I really hope you write more with them very, very soon. Expect a nice, love, gushy email very soon. ;) |
| Rainne 2002-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhew, good job. Glad Simon didn't see anything he shouldn't've, he probably woulda' killed poor, confused Jayne on the spot. U kno wat I'd like to see? That story from Jayne's point of view. I wondered wat could possibly have been going thru his mind kissing River, all the while knowing that altho he DID save her, he also betrayed her. I'd read that. E-mail me if u get the urge to write that, I'd luv to read it and I'd definitely review. K, keep writing! |
| Kryptonite 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI like. |
| Drucilla 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOne of the better Jayne/River stories I've seen out there... interesting that it was written from River's point of view. Well done, well described from inside her head. I like it! |