 Blue 2001-04-26 . chapter 1 I'd have never thought of Relena that way, but... this is actually plausible. Nice that it's original. Write more of this type, onegai? ^_^ |
 Rae 2001-04-16 . chapter 1 Ne? This is a very weird fic. I mean, kinda different view on Relena; I can see it both working and failing. Original. |
 Kenkashi Akira 2001-01-18 . chapter 1 hey there. you really wrote all this crap? (this is a compliment) ... what can i say... i hate relena as well...and this side of her you are showing here is so much of her. i cant believe u even survived after writing this? she's like another version of miaka...the im-somebody version...yet stupid and self-centered and pampered! ugh... so what else can i say? you had a good layout of the fic...the ideas were organized...so...there...
p.s.
u know who i am |
 FierySable 2000-12-06 . chapter 1K, I really don't agree with you in this fic. I'm not flaming you or anything, cuz I love your other stories, but Relena isn't a mercenary little b*tch like you make her out to be. And she wouldn't leave just for the reason of hunting Heero down. When she's alone, she still calls his name and askes him to come back to her. I don't think that's the action of someone who doesn't love or at least care for another person. I know you're probably going to hate me for writing this review, but you asked for feedback, and this is mine. I really enjoyed reading your other stories thoug. Can you finish up Mrs. Chang? Thanx! |
 muvilv 2000-11-26 . chapter 1I never thought of it that way. Interesting perspective! |
 Izzy 2000-11-14 . chapter 1 Great! Good idea about writing about her reasons for 'stalking.' hehe. ps. you might want to upload this with black font or tell everyone to 'Select All.' |
 Reliak 2000-11-14 . chapter 1You definetly need a different font color. But it was pretty cool! Heheheheheheh...makes perfect sense for Relena |
 AMJ 2000-11-14 . chapter 1I read this so where but very cool but just one thing. You shouldn't write in white. |
 someone 2000-11-14 . chapter 1 Ri~ight. Very OOC take on Relena. Well, better luck next time. |
 serena kou 2000-11-14 . chapter 1girl don't write in WHITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
 Cold Dragon 2000-11-14 . chapter 1Your story didn't get uploaded, try again. |