I'd have never thought of Relena that way, but... this is actually plausible. Nice that it's original. Write more of this type, onegai? _

Ne? This is a very weird fic. I mean, kinda different view on Relena; I can see it both working and failing. Original.

hey there. you really wrote all this crap? (this is a compliment) ... what can i say... i hate relena as well...and this side of her you are showing here is so much of her. i cant believe u even survived after writing this? she's like another version of miaka...the im-somebody version...yet stupid and self-centered and pampered! ugh... so what else can i say? you had a good layout of the fic...the ideas were organized...so...there...

p.s.

u know who i am

K, I really don't agree with you in this fic. I'm not flaming you or anything, cuz I love your other stories, but Relena isn't a mercenary little b*tch like you make her out to be. And she wouldn't leave just for the reason of hunting Heero down. When she's alone, she still calls his name and askes him to come back to her. I don't think that's the action of someone who doesn't love or at least care for another person. I know you're probably going to hate me for writing this review, but you asked for feedback, and this is mine. I really enjoyed reading your other stories thoug. Can you finish up Mrs. Chang? Thanx!

I never thought of it that way. Interesting perspective!

Great! Good idea about writing about her reasons for 'stalking.' hehe. ps. you might want to upload this with black font or tell everyone to 'Select All.'

You definetly need a different font color. But it was pretty cool! Heheheheheheh...makes perfect sense for Relena

I read this so where but very cool but just one thing. You shouldn't write in white.

Riight. Very OOC take on Relena. Well, better luck next time.

girl don't write in WHITE!

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