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Reviews For: A New Beginning

Melimea
2004-08-22
ch 1,
abuseLike it. Update?

Melimea
Liz
2003-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story so far. I like the way you put the characters in different spots. lol ^_^
Please update!
ewunia
2002-12-14
ch 1,
abusehehehe I like the beginning. Hope that girls also have good skils and train with the real thing not just the bokens. :))) wish to see their skills a little better than boys. They deserve a good whipping once in a while :))))) Keep writing.
kamorgana
2002-12-13
ch 1,
abuseThis first chapter is nice.
I think you got the characters quite well (except Tsubame who is totally OOC, for the best because I can't stand her in the manga)and Saitoh was sarcastic,I like when he is.
I also like when all the cast is in a story, so go on!
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