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| Melimea 2004-08-22 ch 1, | abuseLike it. Update? Melimea |
| Liz 2003-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story so far. I like the way you put the characters in different spots. lol ^_^ Please update! |
| ewunia 2002-12-14 ch 1, | abusehehehe I like the beginning. Hope that girls also have good skils and train with the real thing not just the bokens. :))) wish to see their skills a little better than boys. They deserve a good whipping once in a while :))))) Keep writing. |
| kamorgana 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis first chapter is nice. I think you got the characters quite well (except Tsubame who is totally OOC, for the best because I can't stand her in the manga)and Saitoh was sarcastic,I like when he is. I also like when all the cast is in a story, so go on! |