I love it1 I love it! I Love it! You are so great. Keep those chapters coming!

yeah... You are literally pulling me away from a work out... I'm really really really hooked and (not to sound egotistical in the slightest) but thats rare.

*gets done with a half hour of reading* ... I'm hooked. It's good, I want to read more, this is a really GOOD fic. I really want to know what happens.

Ahem. Review time. But first, a little Karaoke dedicated to Sekkie. "Quit playing games with my heart!" Hee Hee! And you thought the dynasty was evil! ^O^ Bwahahaha! ^_^; Yep it's definitely friday...
Anyway, poor Sekkie. Can fate get any crueler? Oh well, at least the younger ones are having fun... well, until they get turned into a cat toy! Oh yeah! Girl power, tis all good. Once again, good job balncing the angst with humor. Keep it up! ^_^

Go Megami! Go! Hmm. Very nice. You were able to incorporate humor into a battle scene. Not everyone can do that, or at least incorporate it so well. Another great scroll!

The mysterious Fou-lu: friend or foe?
The mysterious guardians, make quite a show.
But can the summoners defend themselves?
Or by the enemy be now felled?

Suspenseful, ne? :P Great scroll!

Oh the angst! The angst!... You know you love it. :P Poor Sekkie. Maybe destiny can change his misfortune.
What's wrong, Sai? Don't you like to talk with your animal friends? After all, you already talk to fish. ^^;

Wow, Ryo was stunned by the sheer beauty of a bleeding, gashed, yet naked demon woman who just tried to kill him and his friends... somehow that doesn't right... Well, either that or the boy has issues... Ahem. Yeah sure, Dais; you and the other warlords are faeries... Umm... That didn't sound right either! ^_^;

O! Nice van. Huh, oh review time right...Kento's a panty raider! LOL! Sai's the tallest? What has he been eating?! A girl is always prepared! WE never back too much! And among other laughs this scroll is great! The humor is great way to introduce the readers to each of the original Ronin's personalities that seemed to have softened over the years of peace. Good job!

Well done. You gave your readers some relief in the angsty tension by using the format humor-angst-humor (a.k.a. whinning Cale- almost raped Tori- Sekkie's POV)
If you bog down your readers with too much angst then they won't be able to recognize it and/or become bored with all the continuos doom and gloom. Comic relief, like that which you used, is always, ALWAYS a good balancer. Kudos, to you for recognizing that. It's more than some author's can say... ^_^;

OH MY GOSH! HE'S A RONIN! Why yes, Tori, he is. You have been harassing a magnificent warrior during the whole car trip. Congragulations. Now go curl up into an embarrassed ball in the conner, you moody girl you.

Okay, the new character's are hard to form in the mind's eyes of your readers. Maybe if you have one character look up from her homework and describe each character (like Sage did with the warlord's in ch.9) then folks could be more comfortable with have 'people instead of stick figure people' (quoted from a friend) formed in the mind of your readers. It will also make your chapter a tad longer, sorts evenning it out with the script lengths found in later chapters. Other than that, HEY! Nearly getting run over IS an exciting way to start off a series! ^.-

First off, let me just say you are an awesome writer, Onikage. This is the best Ronin fanfic humor I've come across. Keep it up! Secondly, this is my third reding through you stories up to ch.38 and just decided to review the chapters I found most intriguing. Like... Ch. 2 for instance! It's simply amazing how you transformed THIS badass Anubis early on into the the marshmellowy soft Anubis found later on. I'm still scratching my head to find the chapter(s) that shows the change in 'Nubi's POV about Tori (you know from viewing her as bratty kid to veiwing her as an equal adult)... Eh, it seems every time quesions are answered more just take their place... THAT'S A GOOD THING! You are a master of the hook writing technique! Arigato, Onikage-san. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!... eh, sorry if my review is long-winded... ^.^;

Yea! Dedication received. Mucho el thank-o to el you-o. Eh, you know spanish, I at least got the el parts. There was a part the I found really funny, but now I can't remember. Oh, he's either guilty, happy or depressed...yeah, that sounds like Anubis. Anyways, awesome as always. For a second there I thought homeboy was gonna get a little rough, and I was gonna have to put a hurtin' on him. But you know me, I like it rough, ne? Kidding...sort of. Well, I could just imagine Kento thinking "Chick fight! First one to lose a shirt...um...loses(?). Wait! Let me get the pool full of jell-o first!" Eh, but that's just me...Mucho love of chapter. Now update soon! Damnit! If ya need any help, just ask! I heart ya!

This is the best ronin fic i've ever read. who knew cale was so jealous? keep up the goodwork!
p.s. what happened to the character descriptions?