hey, what's going to happen? I love the way this fic is outlined, and I think it has a lot of flare. You need to update it though... I need to know what happens...

That was a little abrupt.

Although, it was very cute, and I loved the Rainbow Connection connection.

Unless I'm mistaken, that's a Muppet song . . . hm

It's beautiful so far. Aw, you know Deanna loves him more than a friend! They should be together!
That's so sad.

like it! deffo think you should continue. maybe nomother scenes tho. i lie the smut lol.

:) I love this story! It's hard to write stuff like this, but that movie definitely needed someone with your talent to finish it. I can't wait for your next update! :)

OMG! Awsome story! Please continue with it! update soon!

I have to say as much as I love Troi and Riker together, I'm so glad you are writing this with them taking their time. We all know that the time spent between Insurrection and Nemesis they would have taken to reevaluate their feelings and what not, Deanna would have never allowed them to immediately jump into a relationship. I love this story. I cannot wait to read more (which is probably why I'm gonna add you to my author alert list. LOL)

this is good, a little depressing so far, but good

Ah now why I haven't reviewed in the past, with this glorious story, I have no idea. So I apologise.

I just hope this extra review will help you to keep going. Your story premise and character's emotions have been beautifully sculptured into an intriguing story.

Please keep going, and lets hope college lets up a little so yu can do this :-D

Thank you for the reading delight

Excellent.

You need to put more detail in your writing...make it longer and more interesting...still wonderful...I love the story line...hope you put them back together!

I love, I love, I love! I want more! Keep going! Wonderfully written...could use more description...hope they get together...she's already waited for him for like 20 years

OOh, I like. I really don't know what will happen. Please keep writing!

Good story so far. Keep up the good work!!

Hi!I really liked your story!It was kinda sad but on the other hand it was probably meant to be that way so it was really good I would really like to read the end when you get a chance to finish it maybe in the future you could try to make their feelings the same only in a more confusing way so that it would give off the suspence that they are more than half split but crumbled all the way so they have absolutly no idea what their getting themselves into.Well see ya and hopefuly thenext chapter will be out real soon