That was really sweet and foreboding all in one. I loved it!

It’s properly creepy. I really like formatting (Rogue's voice in italics, etc.) It seems more powerful this way as opposed to adding the "he said, she said" parts.

Pretty good story although the part about Graydon trying to kill his parents would imply that both he and Kurt are a lot older than Rogue is in your story. I'm also a big fan of the idea that Kurt is the younger brother, it makes more sense when you look at the big picture of X-Men history (check out Wikipedia the online encyclopediea's biography on Mystique...it explains better than I can). The last lines were really powerful though.

Excellent story. The entire thing felt whimsical with your writing style, and the ending gave me chills. I shivered with the last line, and the delivery was timed perfectly. Showing Destiny near the end was used well, and with the way you wrote it came off as a total suprise.

Oh, and I liked that you mentioned Graydon. I like him.

Oh, my . . .
Winds off Antarctica. Wow.

this was very beautiful

I loved it! Mystique, Kurt & Rouge are my favorite characters. The style was really creative.

Hot darn, you are an awesome writer! I was kind of expecting something cheesy with the title, but you opened up the character of Raven terrifically. (I knew she didn't hate Kurt!) The foreshadowing at the end was great and I loved the all dialogue format. I had to really think about whether or not Raven takes her own advise, but it seems to me she is a sort of holder-on-er. I know you don't write often, but when you do, wo boy! Keep up the good work,

!Zil!

That was so good! This is going on my favorite stories list!

That WAS AwSOME I loved it Raven is my favorite villian

Very nice. I liked how Raven's fairytale wasn't really a 'tale' at all. I mean, that's all they really are, aren't they? Just life lessons sugarcoated into cute little packages for easier digestion. The ending was good as well, eerily predictive of Rogue's future actions.

The one thing I did find kind of strange was how little Rogue addressed Irene as 'Auntie Destiny.' Not that there's anything wrong with that; I simply figured that since they are a family that the codenames would be left on the battlefield. I just thought that at that age, Rogue would call her Irene or Reenie.

Overall, a wonderful fic. I hope to read more from you soon!

I'm sorry that I didn't get to review ealier! I've already added your story to my favorites list ^-^ & have written a poem about it. I already posted the thing, though, so I hope you don't mind....

cool.

How sad, beautifull and cute...

More fairytails!!!

What of Snowapocalypse and the seven horsemen?

Loved it.