don't sell yourself short it was a great story (even though you finished at 2:30 am.) anyway i'm a pokeshipper so a love this kind of stories.

the ending was funny

Lol, Aurora is so technical in the end:

"Love... I'll never understand it"

I love it! It was very cute and funny!

that was grate! -#-2!

awh that was a really sweet story nice job! i loved how they still aruged in bed years later lol.

-AAML FAN FOREVER-

Cute, I guess. I loved this line:

"'I'm not stubborn!' Misty said stubbornly."

And how they were arguing over who got to tell Aurora the bedtime story, LOL! It's just like them!

Only one thing. I think if they were stuck in a hole with Pikachu getting kidnapped, Misty would wait for a better time to tell Ash how she felt.

Keep it up!

-neo

I really really enjoyed it. It makes me really wonder ( off in day dream land and comes out slightly) oh ya it was a great story and all. I wonder if Aurora listened to all there arguring or just trailed off in sleep after all its an eazy ticket to staying up late. Oh ash and misty me and none of you business ( internet person)

Yeah, I kinda have to agree. Actually, the adult Ash and Misty cracked me up repeatedly. The "confession" tale seemed just...slightly off. Not by much. The fic barely misses being the first AAMRN to hit my Faves list - not that any other Pokemon romances have.

oh how cute !

Jewel!

You shouldn't judge yourself too harshly, its really good. I like the idea of Ash and Misty being married.

Hey, I can't argue with the masses, or even the author on this one. Personally, I thought that it was excellently written - it's amazing how far your technicalities have come in a short time. You're starting to grasp pace and style - but then you have the others to worry about: mood, character and most importantly plotline - three things which need a buggerload of work on.

's the morning after, and I'm still not too thrilled with this...

I agree with you, Joy-girl, I think Misty's attitude changed WAY too quickly...

Oh well. _;

Thanks for reviewing, anyway...

Satokasu Suki

It's both lame and cute.

It was pretty good except that Misty very suddenly changed her attitude, like, one minute she was mad, and the next she was going to tell him, dunno, maybe it's just me. Good sotry though _