That was poignant. You've really captured the very essence of 'just barely holding on to sanity.' So much emotion in a one shot...

Very, very good.

Cheers!

WOW! It's great, and my favorite part has got to be "What have I done to you?"

And the ending line, with "But I'll never recall who said it."

WOW! That was amazing, it was really touching and sad. Your description of Sirius was really good.

oh, this is so cute! i love how you allow the reader to hear and feel their pain.

That was so perfectly Sirius/Remus. You seem to be inside Remus and know exactly what he's feeling. This is perfect.

:*:silver-sunn101:*:

It is seldom I read, and moreso that I review, as of late, but this story caught my eye and I decided to have a look at it . . . and I am quite happy I did. It is melancholy and poignant, and the simple, direct narrative captures Remus perfectly, providing brilliant imagery without being too flowery or overdone.

This, and the sequel, I utterly love. You have portrayed the characters in an exact light, conveyed sadness without melodrama, and written without excess. This is certainly going on my favourites list. :)

This was very well-written. I can imagine this to be what really took place after the fourth book. You have managed to write from Remus's point of view wondefully well. A terrific piece.

fllen in love with your writting style, and am begging you please, please please write more RL/SB fics(fallen so madle in love...) read the sequel to this before I read this, buts still, more onegai!

-Wolf

complimenti. è bellissima.

I hope you understand even if it's in my own language, I can't help writing it, I just can't find the right words. beautiful.

Wow. Wow. I love Remus so much, and this story just. He's perfect. It's perfect. Perfect in its imperfections, really. It all comes down to Sirius' favorite tea, for me. That sums it all up.

Brilliant.

Wow, awww, adorable, and really good!

Anti

Aw!

Beautifully written, Vane. You have a brilliant way with words. It really made me feel for them... aw!

I'm off to see if you've written other stories.

wow thats really good. i h8 slashes but urs is good

that was soooo well written! i loved it, it was very deep and touching and awh! you are a good writer!

-pie-

Wonderful fic, Vain, as usual. It's Evy, with a new name since the other one is no more. I was hoping you would branch off into the Harry Potter fandom when I read a post on the one of the MLs that mentioned something about the book. I'm glad to see you in this fandom, and I hope that you write more great fics like this. _

Evy