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Reviews for: It Was Fraser, In Chicago, With The Knife
XtinethePirate
2005-01-09 . chapter 1
Ok, that's great. That is awesome. Oh poor Ray! I loved the "Big Mountie Eyes", especially, I can just see him pulling that, too. And Ray banging his head on the steering wheel, that was very much in character for him. I noted he picked up on the original Ray's habit of telling Benny to get out of the car, too. Oh God, I'm still laughing about this...GREAT STORY!
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