Come home or the kneazle gets it.

LOL! You are a treasure!

"What's in it?"
"I don't know. If you keel over I'll presume it's poison."
He drank the potion without another murmur of complaint.

LOL

Still, the flowers were a nice touch."
"With any luck they'll all get hay-fever. Yes, yes, I'm kind to old ladies and children too. What are you looking for?" he added, when he saw Hermione glance up at the ceiling.
"The bolt of lightning that should be striking you down at any time."

LMAO

"Has anyone ever had a word with you about tact?" inquired Snape, when he was finally flat on his back.
"No need. I seem to save all my insults for you," said Hermione cheerfully.

LOL

- She had promised herself she would never be responsible for the death of another lover. Somehow Severus' safety had become linked to not living with him; when he'd asked her, in her own flat, she'd panicked and fled, never allowing herself to think of how much she must have hurt him.

idiot girl - she has a long way to go bfo she gets to Samantha Carter's level of black widow syndrome

- And during all those weeks and months he had never once asked anything of her - as if he didn't know he had the right.

(wipes tear)

- Of all the contingencies he had considered, it had never occurred to him that she was even more ** up than he was.

Thats both profound and LOL

- "And in all this time it's never occurred to one of the cleverest minds in wizardom that it was a diversionary tactic."

Love this explanation!

- Crookshanks gave him a thoughtful look. A few seconds later he padded over to Snape, looked him up and down, visibly discounted any idea of him being a threat and ambled past.
Snape resisted the temptation to speed him on his way with the toe of his boot

i like the tomcat faceoff

Snape supposed that even the best of women were entitled to the odd blind spot.
"You don't mind him moving in, do you?"
An accomplished liar, Snape barely paused. "Of course not."

men could learn much from SS - or mayb they already have (the horror!)

This story is really incredibly written. Loved it!

Clare

This was absolutely exquisite, for me you completely breathed life into these characters to the point that I really wanted it to go on :)

Lovely, sharp, witty and sexy fic *applause*

I really enjoyed this story -- you did a great job in the first chapter of letting the reader experience Snape's in-and-out-of-consciousness view of the world. If that makes sense.
Also, I laughed so hard at this part: "Hermione gave him a look of horror. 'Do you know how terrifying it is to hear you channelling Albus?'" that I almost passed out.
Brilliant. ;)

I do like this story. Since the last time I read it the C2 communities have been introduced so I've added it to mine, as well as saved it to ebook for rereading on my ebook reader/PDA. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Brilliant...and what a name, Fazackerly...

Cute story...I love that he blew up the bunny bed! Thanks!

Beautiful, beautiful story. I pulled out some delightful quotes, including this one: Snape gave a long-suffering sigh before he took her into his arms, her head automatically tucking under his chin as they curled together on the bed. "You never used to get PMS this badly. I would have remembered. And poisoned you."

I saw this recc'd at /yellow_cassy/hp

You gave a wonderfully Slytherin explanation of why Severus insulted Hermione's teeth when she was a child.

And I absolutely love this part:
"Of all the contingencies he had considered, it had never occurred to him that she was even more ** up than he was. His eyes bright, he gave a shark-like smile out into the darkness.

That, he could deal with".

Please give me links if you write in other fandoms, or have original fic on the internet.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I came back to enjoy an old favorite, and what do I find but a bonus chapter I never read before! Come home or the kneazle gets it ... hee. Terrific! You have such a gift for writing Severus/Hermione, kaz - PLEASE do a post-DH fic where Hermione returns to Snape's body, brings him back from the brink, and realizes he's the man for her! Please? With fluffy pink bunnies on top? I live in hope... ;)

O! superbly-written. A total pleasure to read the surface prattle and feel the depths.

Huzzah! I love coming back and rereading this story.

"I mean it, Hermione. Besides, you couldn't hurt me. You fight like a girl."
The lie was outrageous, and totally out of character, but try as she might to control them her giggles finally betrayed her.
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:D made me laugh.

this story was amazing.
there was humor, there was depth, and there was romance.
wonderful!

well done.
added to favorites :)

ohh, I loved this story very much.
So many things amused me.

and the last line :D
ooh, shouldn't have done that.
but I don't blame him.


anyways.
well done.
added to favorites!