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tsuj 8/25/06 . chapter 41
I enjoyed this story and I plan to look for the sequel. The only criticism I would give is that the continuity of when Harry and Albus are referred to as Alec and Gran'dad, respectively. When there were descriptive sentences they weren't always identified by their real names and I felt they should have been - unless we were reading someone's POV who didn't know the secret.

Still an intriguing story. Well done.
luvinfanfic 8/4/06 . chapter 41
i really love your story!
jayley 6/27/06 . chapter 18
that was funny; harry was being rebellious to dumbledore!
jayley 6/27/06 . chapter 8
uhm, i don't know about a 15 year old bein an 11 year old. it's little too far fetched. i know this story is years old, but it probably wulda been better to start him in third year...oh well, still seems like a good story!
MrRobertsIII 6/25/06 . chapter 41
Thanks for the fic! I've generally avoided Snape/Harry fics like the plague, but this one really isn't that sort of fic to begin with. I enjoyed Snape protectiveness of Alec.

I think I laughed the hardest when Dumbledore told Alec "your grounded."

I look forward to your take on how Hermione, Ron, and crowd are taking Harry's missing.
Jazzy 6/19/06 . chapter 1
I really enjoy the whole Web of Lies series... This must be the fifth time I have started reading it.. ::grins:: _ This is the best ever (well...beside chocolate icecream...)!
Aldavinur 5/28/06 . chapter 41
Wow! I absolutely love this fic!

I'm a big fan of the Dumbledore-Harry/Father-Son relationship, not in blood but in their behaviour!

And Severus and Minerva are just a bonus ;-)

I like Harry's new name and how he really seems to be Dumbledores grandson! I nearly wish he would be his true grandson, because I wonder what will happen when his disguise is revealed somewhen. I hope that they can keep their relationship then. But I guess I will just have to read the sequel, hm?

The only sad thing is that all the others, especially Severus and Sirius will probably be out of their minds with anger when they find out that Dumbledore and Harry lied to them.

And it's sad to think about how worried his friends have to be, because to them he is still lost.

I can't wait to go on with the sequel!

Thank you for this wonderful work!
Dragon Tamer103088 5/21/06 . chapter 41
oh wow this is ausom, I'm so glad I found this story. Keep up the good work. On to the sequel
oldman543 5/20/06 . chapter 41
yay keep it up
Cheska 5/16/06 . chapter 41
no... X_X Now I have to go to the next one
Cheska 5/16/06 . chapter 22
Bwahahah XD Harry dragged Snape along! Whoo
Cheska 5/16/06 . chapter 21
That was so cute _
Cheska 5/16/06 . chapter 16
So far, this fanfic has been amazing. XD
Cheska 5/16/06 . chapter 11
*grins* nice cover-up! _ And the fact that everyone feels guilty about bothering Albus based on his appearance - all pale.
imakeeper 5/6/06 . chapter 41
why do i have the feeling he shall be like a ravenclaw... or a lsytherin if he allows himself?
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