Awesome work driving emotional value into the fan fic!

But now i really have to go.

Til tomorrow!

im back; i was able to scrape some more time.

Dang! A cliffie and I gotta go!

Tomorrow then. Farewell, Farewell!

I LOVE the Severus-Harry thing,

whenever i read it in a fan fic,

I just LOVE it.

you've been nominated? awesome, i didnt know there were awards like that specifically

I totally agree with my best friend; this is getting really sweet.

Good work on your fan fic! Grammar looks satisfactory.

Ha ha, Its like im a teacher.

Anyways, I probably dont have long before i gotta go.

i gotta finish the next chapter, at least...

Ouch. Dumbledore is pretty angry with Harry. Or Alexander.

Nice work so far,

But I noticed in a previous chapter punctuation mistakes with the quotations.

My best friend told me she thought this fan fic was also "SO SWEET."

Im liking this fan fic more.

I can't exactly praise your fan fic as my friend did, considering you havent gotten into the drama or plot that much yet, but so far, you've done pretty good.

Oh yes, I almost forgot:

Your chapters are quite short in comparison with the writer who wrote that fan fic series i mentioned earlier. Hers were pretty lengthy.

Not that short is bad. Far from it, I find it quite refreshing.

I cant wait to get INTO the story; so I can respond similarly to how my best friend did: OMG, OMG, OMG.

Hi; my best friend was positively freaking over this fan fic: "I LOVE IT!" was only part of the email, and believe me, there were a lot more 'o's. She seems to have been pretty excited over it, so on her fervent recommendation I decided to read this fan fic.Im basically a newcomer to the fan fic world, having only read one fan fic "series" so far , and part of a fan fic that i stopped because i didnt feel it exciting or attractive enough to continue reading.

Im actually writing a fan fic myself, wish me luck!

Anyways, im going to be reading this fan fic of yours, and if i like it, the next one, and then probably im going to check out the other fan fics by you.

Good Luck Writing any other fan fics or novels or pieces of writing you may be writing,

Absolutly brilliant work! Really, truly fantastic. Good work on not going to out of character, even though a bit of mild adjustment was required, you kept it all very believable.

I had a good time reading this story, but I almost had a hard time picturing what Harry looked like when he was disguised because I have a friend named Alec too and his face was almost always in my head. I was also picturing Alec from Dark Angel, you know, X5-494 played by the yummy Jensen Ackles.

Great story! If this is the Prequel, what is the main story like? You're right about it being really long. I'm going to read the next part now. Keep writing! You're really good at it.

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I've read this a few times before but I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed it. It's a really great story that captures the essence of the characters while altering them slightly to fit the storyline. I'm off to read the sequel now.