Excellent resolution to Albus abandoning Harry for 4 weeks. I hope they move beyond this. I liked their relationship as grand father and grand son.

-Melverne

I wondered if you would mention this. Anyone perceived to be very close to the head master would be at risk. I'm glad Voldemort made an attempt to get Alec. It is good to see Harry excelling. Snape was creating his own spells. The Marauders were animagus. Hermoine is absolutely brilliant. It is good to see Harry step up.

-Melverne

That was great. Snape actually tolerating or even liking Alec was a surprise. An even bigger surprise is that Albus is capable of paternal insticts. I think Harry is finding things that he missed out on, while he was in the Dursley's "tender" care.

-Melverne

Snape would respect a simple but accurate response. Granted being a Slytherin, he would be expecting something a bit more complex. All around I thought there conversation was well done.

-Melverne

Nice work for addressing Remus and Sirius. Both of them with access to an enhanced sense of smell would have picked Harry out easily. Will there be a more permanent solution for his scar. Things like sweat, accidentally rubbing it off or even a shower would reveal Harry's trade mark scar. You were detailed enough to address Harry's sent in the story. It will be interesting to see if you address other problems as well.

Will there be a more permanent solution for his scar? Things like sweat, accidentally rubbing it or even a shower will remove the make up.

The time frame he attended school did not have contacts you could leave in over night. If he goes to Hogwarts, Harry will be sharing a room with other boys. His contacts would have to come out or his scar might be revealed accidentally. The necklace changed the pitch of his voice but he is 15 there are other changes with puberty. Living in the dorms will have its own challenges.

Great story.

-Melverne

Harry is retrieved from the Dursleys. It is nice to see Dumbledore as something other than cold and calculating. Nicely done.

-Melverne

Interesting concept. I haven't read too many stories where Albus takes in Harry. Normally I prefer longer chapters but since the story is complete and received an enormous review response I thought I would check it out. Its off to a good start.

-Melverne

I am very much enjoying this story.

This was really great. It's so good, that even though I usually can't stomach Dumbles, I read it; he didn't set off my well honed Paranioa Meter (TM) once- a mark of how believable I thought it was.

Great story!

Fantastic story!

this is def going into my to-read basket :D cant wait!

Brilliant story!

great story can't wait to find out what happen next please update soon

OMG. i just spent like 4 hours straight reading this - AND ITS AMAZING! I LOVED EVERY SECOND! :)