It is unfortunate for me to stumble upon what you call a fic (the first chapter lacks depth and is hardly descriptive). And from the impression I gained from reading your summery you make it seem that you were 'forced' to write this (dare I say) crap. I have one word for this : Pitiful!

why are you even posting ur story in this catagory???? can't u read???? it's just a waste of space and time on your part.

Erm...it's called the Sailor Moon section 'cause it contains stories about Sailor Moon. Perhaps you should read into this a little.