Great job. I guess it cannot be easy to express thousands of year of regret, pain, rage and all those other dark emotions.

Very well-done

A great poem for a great scene. I often wonder if Methos' anger in that scene was directed at Mac or at himself. This poem plays that ambivalence very well.

Nice poem! I could never have written it... but you are able to capture the entire story in just a few verses. Nicely done!

this poem is very well written.

I liked that a lot. Writing in first person POV can be tricky, but you have handled it very well. And I enjoyed the change in tones, showing that Methos still carries a part of his old self within.
And, of course, the last few lines were beautiful.
Good work. And thanks for the reviews.

WOW! I'm very impressed, that was such a wonderful poem! Almost like a song, it seems. I just loved the line:

"And a thousand years of midnight

That have torn mine apart"

I wouldn't want Methos to sacrifice his life, but in your Poem it makes absolutely sense! Thanks for writing it!

cio, hoellenwauwau