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| Carolyn 2003-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAre you working on a sequel yet? I really want to know what happens next. |
| Redhood79 2002-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is good! I read the first part too! At first I thought the idea of Jayne and River was weird, but now I can't get enough! Write more fics!!! |
| j.sharpe 2002-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI positively love it, I want more so please write another one soon. |
| Carolyn 2002-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think you capture the inner-workings of Jayne's mind really well (kinda scary though). Really liked the story, I hope you'll continue with something a little more risque for us perpetually unsaieted. Perhaps a NC-17 at the Glow Archive? (she asks hopefully) There's not enough het over there. |
| Kryptonite 2002-12-16 ch 1, | abuse*smiles so big, it lights up a room* I love this, I really do. Hurry up and get the next chapter/segment of the series up okay? And while your at it, check out my story. Keep writing. |
| Meg 2002-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude! Dedicated to me?? :blush: Sigh, I am SO your stalker. This was, yet again, incredble!!! I loved it from River's POV but I just couldn't help thinking about what was going through Jayne's head the whole time. I'm so psyched you wrote this! Totally made my day. ;) And whooo, bring on the smut! Keep 'em coming, I need to keep my addiction going strong.... |
| DesertDragon 2002-12-15 ch 1, | abuseBoth of the Apple stories are fantastic. I'm a big Jayne fan, and you've captured him well. I usually picture him with Kaylee (That's the ship I'm writing now) but these 2 are interesting :) Keep going ... |
| kittyb90 2002-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. Jayne's POV is pretty damn hot. Can't wait for more. |
| Annabelle Crane 2002-12-15 ch 1, | abuseCan't wait for you to write more! Loved it just as much as the first one! More power to River/Jayne! |