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KAGR
2003-09-23 . chapter 19
You have my sincerest condolences on the loss of your beloved Smitty. I know how hard it is to watch furry friends slip away and have no way to help. Just take comfort in the knowledge that you'll meet again someday on the Rainbow Bridge.
sharee
2003-08-25 . chapter 20
great story i cant wait to finish it, that is if my computer ever lets me :chucks heavy objects at opposing computer: well im going to duel with it until i can finish so great story
Colleen and Fish (the fish)
2003-06-22 . chapter 36
Excellent end to an excellent story...It's sad to know you aren't going to be writing fanfiction anymore (or at least for a while), but you shouldn't have to do something you really don't feel like...

It's been fun, I've enjoyed reviewing quite a bit. ^_^
CrinkleCutRuffles
2003-06-19 . chapter 36
Thank you for the review of my parody. Glad you liked it (:

I may appear more savage than I actually am.

Yes, the Snape part did sucker me in. You actually write quite well and your spelling and grammar are also quite good so I was hoping you weren’t going to make it a Snape romance fic.

Sorora had a husband and she admitted to having faults, I don’t mind a bit of angst if it is done well so this scored brownie points with me. Give them faults and it’s a saving grace. I didn’t think I would like Snape having a Surprise!Sister but I did. JK hasn’t told us much about his past so it is plausible. It is evident that Snape does care for his sister (although he keeps it well hidden) and is annoyed by this fact as he unwillingly seems to help her out. The little hero moment for Neville was a nice touch.

I like the way the events of the story shook up the wizarding world and that you managed to keep everyone more or less in character. I’m also a stickler for remaining true to the facts stated in the books and you did that well also.

I also enjoyed the way you ended it off with a few things still left hanging. I don’t think it would have rung true if Sorora and Severus had suddenly become the best of friends just because they are on the same side in the end. Relationships in real life need to be worked on and so do those one represents in writing if you want it to have any degree of realism. I’m sure they’ll get there eventually (:

Peter’s death was a bit of a let down, done so casually but I suppose that is somehow a metaphor to how much Voldemort thought he mattered, right? Harry thought he could threaten him with the death of the servant but Voldemort ends up killing Wormtail in the end, almost as an after thought. I can tell you put a lot of thought into these things, giving them layers for those of us that think way too much about things and analyse them to death!

That said I think I will finish up here.

CC
anntagonist
2003-06-17 . chapter 35
aaggh this goes all against my hollywood enforced expectation of the climax filled with explosions, barely credibly escapes in which the characters would have technically died 15 minutes ago
How very Tolkien of you!
I like that Harry made Voldemort dance. I'd like see the Dark Lord do a Billy Elliot
Colleen and Fish (the fish)
2003-06-17 . chapter 35
Another excellent chapter!^_^

That voice in Harry's head, was that Dumbledore or is Harry finally losing it? (*grins* it's bound to happen sometime)

I'm wondering what those memories were...I have a feeling they were pleasant ones...maybe about his family? (hehe...wild guess there)

I'm actually glad Voldemort wasn't killed off. Once you destroy evil, another bigger, badder evil comes along to balance the surplus of good. Little scary thinking about what that might be.
CrinkleCutRuffles
2003-06-17 . chapter 35
"A mere memory had forced him to" - Nice connection with COS (:

So Sor & Julian will be fine right? TELL ME NOW! Please? Okay okay I'm waiting patiently.
CrinkleCutRuffles
2003-06-17 . chapter 32
JULIAN IS STILL ALIVE??!! Lucky Sor.

Draco you pansy.
anntagonist
2003-06-15 . chapter 34
AAggh hanging on again!! Cool chapter!

Yay Draco getting smashed.
Colleen and Fish (the fish)
2003-06-14 . chapter 34
Yay, Peter's bitin' the dust! heheh ^_^

And why is it that you're always naseaus (gah, can't spell!) after you're unconcious? I was after anesthesia and so were a few others I know. Not fair! Not worried about Sorora, though, she'll pull through, I know it!

random thingies:
I'm listing to a song called "Magic Stick". Sounds like a pervy wizard song to me.

At the bookstore near me, I saw "The Sirus Conspiracy" and "The Werewolf Handbook" sitting on the shelf right next to eachother.
Kaelli Karali
2003-06-06 . chapter 33
WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE! Really good!
anntagonist
2003-06-06 . chapter 32
hahaha luved it!! specially the "'Do keep it to yourself.'" bit, very much an exasperated wife talking to her foot-in-mouth husband.
Colleen and Fish (the fish)
2003-06-05 . chapter 33
I was able to read it tonight after all, hooray!

I love Arthur Weasley, everyone's father should be like him ^_^

The chess scene was really cute. And I think half the school and a few of the teachers also have bets on them getting together! Especially Trewlaney, though, because she already knows. *grin*

So you're thinking of killing Peter off? I say go for it. (can't stand wishy-washy whiny evil people!)
Kaelli Karali
2003-05-31 . chapter 31
GO SOR! HA! Take that Malfoy! Ok...so I'm a bit hyper...I swear I didn't have any sugar today. ^_~ Keep writing!
kat-tak
2003-05-29 . chapter 22
It's really good!
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