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Kurayumei
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
It's nice seeing the chemistry between Jackie and Hyde- they're really beautiful together and it shows in this story. Thanks for uploading it.
RegardstoBroadway
2007-06-30 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really great! I loved how you slowly threaded in her shift from Kelso to Hyde. And we all know that was for the best. (If only the show's writers knew that...)

Great! This is going in my favorites.
deeta
2006-12-26 . chapter 1
He, I love this. Each dialogue is more or less in character. I could actually see the guys saying all the stuff. And Jackie and Hyde, I love how you made them fit into your story. That's really nice. This is the first time I read anything by you but I'm definitely impressed and would love to read more *perusing through your J/H stories*
Miss Tonya
2005-07-23 . chapter 1
Great story! I liked how you brought the softer side of Hyde out without making him out of character. You're a good writer!
DesertFlower1
2005-03-12 . chapter 1
Definitely a favorite!
darbi
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
Wow...knock my socks off! Man, for someone who has a hard time getting into Jackie's head (I tend to stick with Hyde's POV...it's just easier for me) this was quite refreshing. This line just cracked me up...'Well, I realized writing, "Dear Michael you suck." wouldn't just cut it.' How Jackie, huh? Anyway...great job.
Brea Smith
2004-03-14 . chapter 1
Great strory. Romantic, true, and realistic for Jackie and Hyde.
~Brea Smith~
Lv4the70s
2003-03-16 . chapter 1
This was such a sweet, lovely story. Great writing! Superb job!
anni
2003-01-11 . chapter 1
This was just beyond fabulous! Sweet, a little sad, and just wonderful. I hope to see a lot more J/H fics from you.
Lux1
2003-01-06 . chapter 1
Great story. It was very well written, I like your style. Awesome job on everything. :o)
Washi
2002-12-31 . chapter 1
I love it. The story is dead on with the characters. Keep on writing stuff like this!
Libertyne
2002-12-21 . chapter 1
Thanks, guys for the positive feedback. This little story came to me at work and from there I'd decided to come home, write and see how it'd turn out. It honestly took me about an hour, so it's a bit sloppy. But seriously, thanks again for the wonderful reviews. I hope my muse comes back again and maybe I'll have some more Jackie/Hyde stories up!
Raven33
2002-12-21 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really, really great! I loved it!
Candy.71
2002-12-20 . chapter 1
That was awesome! Are you gonna continue it?
Psycgurl
2002-12-20 . chapter 1
Wow...you are an excellent writer. That was written with beauty and class. Great fic. You captured Hyde and Jackie's character's really well and expressed their feelings/emotions perfectly, especially Jackie's. I look forward to reading more of your fics. All in all...EXCELLENT job.
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