This is a good story.

That was so good!

That's just so sweet! That's- OH- I loved that so much! Oh wow, that was so well done. Go you!

A.J x

Awww- that was so cute! And non-slash, even better. :) Will there be more chapters...? A little tip, though- you seem to use 'he' somewhat ambiguously in the story. You might want to change it to the hobbit's name sometimes. Otherwise, great story!