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| sunsetpony101 2007-06-24 ch 6, | abusehey why'd u stop!? its a good fic, but u havent updated in like 3 years! pplz update? |
| gee0 2006-10-27 ch 6, | abusevery good fiction! |
| Indigo Blue.x 2006-09-17 ch 6, | abuseOoh, I LOVE this fic! And you've left it on a cliffhanger, dammit! I don't know if you're going to continue it, seeing as it's been two years, but I thought I'd review anyway... maybe remind you that it exists =P. This is fantastic, anyway, I love the details and foreshadowing; even little mentions like 'Dervish' being sorted (of Dervish & Banges; am I right?) just make it complete. And it's the first Dumbledore fic I've read, so it's much more original than a lot of the fiction on this site. Continue? Indy.x |
| kateydidnt 2005-12-04 ch 6, | abuseI really wish there were more to this story. Just when it gets to a really interesting point too! |
| amopet4 2005-10-13 ch 6, | abuseLittle Allie is so cute!! And I love Simon, too. Great story, update soon! |
| Chrissy92 2005-07-03 ch 6, | abusethis is a great story. many people haven't written about Albus Dumbledore's background. You have to update, because you can't leave us hanging. |
| Miss Becky Malfoy 2005-02-11 ch 6, | abuseI really like it. I know you haven't updateded in a lonng time but could you try and update a little sooner than a year? Love the story. |
| The Allknowing Tonks 2005-01-01 ch 6, | abusethis is incredible! please update it soon! it's my favourite of your fics at the moment! if there isn't a chapter up within, say, a week, i'm gunna cry! |
| pimpilidimpi 2004-09-21 ch 6, | abusePlease, continue writing this - I think it's really very interesting! |
| flowing-starlight 2004-08-27 ch 6, | abuseI sincerely hope you update soon. Otherwise you're going to have an awful lot of people panicing... |
| Tapdancing Parakeet 2004-08-15 ch 6, | abuseWay to dig up an old story! I like where this is going. Interesting bit about religion. Rowling pretty much avoids it because of all the controversy, but I can see it making sense in the era that this story takes place. Still, kind of sucks that everyone at Hogwarts is Christian, but again, that was more common in that time period. About Fawkes: one theory I've heard (and you've probably heard it too) is that he used to belong to Godric Griffindor. Will Albus discover that later in the story, or do you not buy into that theory? I hope you keep this story alive, and don't let it almost die again. =) |
| AgiVega 2004-07-23 ch 6, | abuseThanks heaven you didn't completely abandon this fic! This is one of my favs, I was so sad to see that you never updated it! Hehe, the old school song indeed sucked. Bet it was Albus who wrote the new one ;) I loved the way the kids prayed and thanked God for their magic talents :) I found Albus's letter to his mum cute and funny with all those mistakes. As for the final line... a Professor Dumbledore? Some relations of little Albus's? Or am I misunderstanding things? This is not a time-travel fic with two Albuses at the same time, is it? I hope not... But it's your fic, you can do with it whatever you see fit. Just continue, please, and do it faster this time! |
| TsukiNoBara 2004-05-25 ch 3, | abuseAt first, I wasn't interested in this story, because, from the summary, I thought it was about Flamel as a child. But I got bored and decided, "hey, maybe this is interesting." So I checked out. The nickname Allie didn't make any sense, since I thought it was Flamel. But it makes sense now. ^_^ I like Ollivander. "Precisely eleven." ^_^ ~C-chan |
| Dark Queen of Roses 2004-01-11 ch 5, | abusethis story is so cool! i love how fawkes was introduced into the story! and the sorting hat's song was wonderful! |
| milkmup 2003-12-11 ch 5, | abuseWow. This is a totally different kind of story than that I'm accustomed too, but that makes it all the better. I can't wait until you write the next chapter. |