So the summary is gay, huh? Didn't know that words could have a sexual preference...

I liked the story. I liked seeing the side of Seto not usually seen...especially in fanfics I've read. However, not to be rude or anything, maybe you should check your grammar. I found a couple of mistakes, but nothing really serious. Probably just slipped. We all make those mistakes. Great work, though. Very good. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next story. Seriously.
~Shady Kiaba

Paragraphs...spelling...grammar...oh god it burns.
Bad characterization. Bad...EVERYTHING. It's 'KAIBA', you illiterate fangirl extraordinaire!
There is nothing worse than writing a fanfic about a character and spelling their name wrong all the way through.
Urgh. My eyes now need to be scooped out of my head, doused in bleech and reinserted before I will trust myself near any decent fics.
Have some consideration for the English language, will ya, kid?

AW, so sad ;_; Well, just another fact to put in my SETO "fact" files! Thanx!
Oh, and it was good!

Poor Kaiba, he has such a miserable life

Good story! Great work!

its good...but you spelled Kaiba like "Kiaba" every time...lol

Sakura: I'm a huge Seto Kaiba fan ok. You might say I'm obsessed. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, just spell his name right!!!! KAIBA! I feel better now...

kinda sad considering iam a kaiba fan but i like it 3 stars out of 5