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| Zetta 2004-04-14 ch 2,  | abuseJag! Yay! :o) Kyp is just her mentor, and while they're close, there are too many other things going on with them for them to be more than master/apprentice/friends. However, Jag is a pilot, Chiss, hot, and much better for her. Jag/Jaina!! |
| JAGSGURL15 2003-11-26 ch 2, | abusehye hye hye hye hey i love this stoyry |
| JainaGal 2003-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuselol... I understand the feeling . Those nuts r turning the new jedi order into the "everybody change into somone else!" series... this story was alright...i'd prefer it if u made it a zekk story tho...but...good job. :D ~Maniacal Laugh~ JainaGal |
| Mariko Duknic 2003-04-17 ch 2, | abusemkay. more? |
| EBrooklynW 2003-04-09 ch 2, | abusePlease Please Please continue writing. I really enjoy the way you're writing the characters and stuff... if you want a suggestion for where the story should go, i vote for a Jaina/Kyp minus Colonel Cardboard. Please Keep writing! |
| Ravenpan 2003-03-05 ch 2, | abuse*hugs* the story is going well. Don't worry - that's what fan fiction is all about, it doesn't have to follow things to the letter. Be creative, and see where your keyboard, or pen, lead you. Perhaps you'll taverse a time unknown and unknowable and situations that otherwise would only remain in speculation. Keep up the good work! RavenPan@juno.com |
| Ravenpan 2003-03-05 ch 1, | abuseI find this quite enjoyable, I hope you continue to continue. One thoguht, though - Jag's a col, isn't he? |
| Nikita 2003-01-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI just happened to run across this and decided to give it a try. I have to say you have a very easy writing style that the characters fit into nicely. It's easy to read as well. This is actually the first NJO/Jaina/Kyp/Jag fic that I've gotten beyond the first few lines on. You're doing qutie well and I hope you keep it up long enough to finish. And on another note, NOT ZEKK, anyone but Zekk. Hell, have her hook up with Piggy before she hooks up with Zekk. If you want a choice between Jag and Kyp, my vote is in Jag's direction. I've never been overly comfortable with the Kyp/Jaina relationship. My two cents having been dropped in the pot, I'll take off now. ~Nikita |
| wild horse 2002-12-27 ch 1, | abusei liked your fic very much! yes, i think kyp should be portrayed as a nicer guy, they go and mess him all up in the njo. give us more! |
2002-12-26 ch 2, anon. | abusePlease continue the story. |
| sb 2002-12-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think this good. |
| rain 2002-12-23 ch 2, anon. | abusei really liked your story, jaina is like my most favourite character in the star wars universe, she isn't as kooky as jacen or as hell-bent as anakin, or even as unblanaced as han and as lost as luke, she is like the only one with real problems and real quandaries, way ta go!!! |
| JediAerin 2002-12-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseYes, I agree. Jaina is always shunted to one side as the 'tomboy', ever since the fiosrt books she was in. I mean, her mom walks that fine line between stereotype and emotion, why can't they get Jaina to express something human? lease continue. Jag reminds me of my boyfriend...especally the hair thing. Thank you! |
| BlackJacket42 2002-12-16 ch 1, | abusenice beginning. keep it up. |
| Anne 2002-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting...i'll read more... |