|Reviews for Pompous remembrance day poem|
| Anon 1/9/13 . chapter 1
First, I have to say that your "poem" has poor grammar. Where are the periods between sentences? And shouldn't it be in stanza form?
I also don't understand why this is under "Behind Enemy Lines". This should be under "Miscellaneous", I suppose. Otherwise, you could say perhaps that the narrator to this "poem" is the main character of the movie (Oh, God. I already forgot his name...)
Er, anyways, you need to seriously fix this if you want this to be successful.
| Cielag 1/18/03 . chapter 1
Right...I am still questioning on why this poem is in the "Behind Enemy Lines" fan fiction when it appears to only have the mentioning of being "behind enemy lines". Was there a method to this maddness or was it just a spontaneous idea that you decided to act upon?