BEAUTIFUL! :'D

Great

I keep crying its so sad he should of never had that heart attack

loved this chapter

Omg I love this chapter u r the worlds best writer ever

Love it

This has to be one of the most underrated Titanic stories-underrated simply because it doesn't have half the reviews it deserves. It is one of the best-written, interesting, and plausible Jack-lives stories I've read. I especially appreciated Jack, Rose, and Cal making amends and the closer relationship Rose had with Ruth.

Being a big fan of Titanic, I love stories where Jack lives, and more so, where they stop while he's still alive after the sinking. Due to that, stories like this, where Jack dies somewhere in it, bothers me a lot. I cried when you killed him off, yet the story still had more to offer. Her life after Jack's death, her marriage to Cal, telling her story like in the movie, and even dying I'm the end. Rose stayed strong in the story, stronger than she would have if Jack was not with her, like when her son died. The story was well though out - some chapters a bit short, like the one that contained Jack's death - but still an amazing job. :)

I had read this story a while ago, and now that I re-read it, I do have to say that it was simply... INCREDIBLE! It was so touching, from the very beginning to the very end, and it filled me with so many feelings, impossible to be described! Congrats!

This story is beautiful. I wish teh movie had played out like this. :)

Your story is so touching! I loved it from beginning to end. The best Titanic Fan Fic I have read.

Your story was incredible, and it was very well thought out. It was a lot better than most other fanfics that I have read and written (although my written works aren't much to talk about). The story you wrote was sweet and didn't make everything perfect and the ending was a good finale.

I love This Jack's humor regarding the Titanic is Hilarios. I love it when he said ...but this ship has yet to have a collision with an iceburg, so i suppose they're doing something right. LOL )

Sorry I misread

You made a few mistakes time wise like the fact that if Rose new she was having a baby in april of 1912 the baby would have been born in january. BBut other then that great story I love it. I really love the tension between jacks ex and rose at the begining