I found the blurb to this story interesting, but very disappointed when I opened it to read it and found that it was very hard because it was not double spaced (IE an enter after each paragraph.) I normally skip a head to see if such formatting changes, but in this story it doesn't so I haven't been able to read the story.

hi

I thought this story was very well written. You should write a sequel where it's a couple of years later and Lorilei is a teenager.

I just finished reading this in one sitting and I honestly thought it was one of the most well written fanfictions I have ever read. Yes, it had strong themes but they were mature and well stated without just being gross. Good job.

yay they did end up getting married
excellent
nice ending

o o
interesting
he left :(

oh snaps that was an awesome chapter
cant wait to see what happens now

nice
how gangster is that
lol
:D

oh o
definatly a twsit in the chapter
but the golden trio back together yaay
and the ron bit about how he got laid ahahah that was brilliant

o interesting chapter indeed lol

oh wow that was definatly an interesting chapter

nice nice chapter in deed

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i love draco
nice chapter

o interesting chapter
he came back for her :D

o that was a nice chapter