 Muggledog 2007-02-09 . chapter 6Okay, so I read the "chapter" that was really an extended author's notes (I don't have a problem with that, by the way) and have been thinking about what you wrote about your use of Ginny-bashing, nad though you will doubtlessly hate me for it, I have a thought or two to add. First, I understand the reasons you cited as the Ginny-bashing being nessiccary to your plot, and yet I have a hard time imagining any of the Weasleys that way, especially Ginny: You made her kinda slutty and coy, which I find disgusting--of course, ever since I took up HP and the Sorcerer's Stone, I fell in love with every Weasley family member, so, yes, you would be justified in accusing me of having a bias, but even so...secondly, however, I have to praise your choice if for no other reason then the fact that, as a seasoned fanfic reader, I have seen many character bashings, some good, some not, but never before reading your work have I discovered Ginny-bashing, so I have to commend the originality in the idea. I will return to this later, but I have some other things to touch upon.
I like everything aside from what I mentioned above, so naturally, I will check back to see how Ron and Hermione are doing, which unfortunately drags me back to Ginny...
Seeing as Ginny is poised to shamelessly take advantage of very poor Neville, who is Harry going for? Cho, I suppose...dovetailing on that, how can Harry, Ron and the rest of the Weasley brothers laugh at Neville's predicament with Ginny's crush on him and her taking advantage of him? Neville is so pure, so selfless, he deserves that sort of relationship the least of all people!!
But, in conclusion, I am very fond of your writing style. Also, you created a scene that gives insight into Hermione's home life, which far too few fanfic writers do. |
 Aimee 2004-06-13 . chapter 6 Wow! Get the next chapter out soon! I can't wait!
By the way, I think it's a great breath of fresh air to see Ginny in a different light. The "angel-Ginny" thing is so fake. She has to mess up some times.
Ok, I know you've probably heard this a million times, but it never hurts: You're a great writer! I think your story rocks, and I wouldn't change it.:D Good Job! |
 Fistful of Moondust 2003-02-11 . chapter 6I haven't read your other fanfiction or anything, but I have read a lot of fanfic and I've got to tell you...YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!! I even loved the Ginny bashing part! I think those who were upset about it ought to bugger off (am now ducking from flying vegetables--please don't hate me)! Anyhow, I'm really looking forward to your next update...keep up the good writing (and really, it is). Oh, and I should add, I really like the plot and I can tell you've got a vivid imagination (and if you really don't--don't let me know, let me think that's how you are--lol)!!! |