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Muggledog
2007-02-09 . chapter 6
Okay, so I read the "chapter" that was really an extended author's notes (I don't have a problem with that, by the way) and have been thinking about what you wrote about your use of Ginny-bashing, nad though you will doubtlessly hate me for it, I have a thought or two to add. First, I understand the reasons you cited as the Ginny-bashing being nessiccary to your plot, and yet I have a hard time imagining any of the Weasleys that way, especially Ginny: You made her kinda slutty and coy, which I find disgusting--of course, ever since I took up HP and the Sorcerer's Stone, I fell in love with every Weasley family member, so, yes, you would be justified in accusing me of having a bias, but even so...secondly, however, I have to praise your choice if for no other reason then the fact that, as a seasoned fanfic reader, I have seen many character bashings, some good, some not, but never before reading your work have I discovered Ginny-bashing, so I have to commend the originality in the idea. I will return to this later, but I have some other things to touch upon.

I like everything aside from what I mentioned above, so naturally, I will check back to see how Ron and Hermione are doing, which unfortunately drags me back to Ginny...

Seeing as Ginny is poised to shamelessly take advantage of very poor Neville, who is Harry going for? Cho, I suppose...dovetailing on that, how can Harry, Ron and the rest of the Weasley brothers laugh at Neville's predicament with Ginny's crush on him and her taking advantage of him? Neville is so pure, so selfless, he deserves that sort of relationship the least of all people!!

But, in conclusion, I am very fond of your writing style. Also, you created a scene that gives insight into Hermione's home life, which far too few fanfic writers do.
chocolate frog fan
2005-02-21 . chapter 6
hey hello how are you this fine evening
im fine thankyou. ok now that thats over you probably think im nuts but im really not. ok maybe sometimes but thats not the point i just felt like being courtious is all anyway your story is great if it weren't why would i waste my time reading it and then even reviewing it so ya. its good and malfoy really is a git i don't know how some people think that he and hermione should be together it just dosen't make any sense at all because she and ron were obviously meant for each other so anyway im really bored. lol but thats ok im just going to keep on talking to you even though i don't know you. this is me, my name is hannah and im canadian even though i don't say eh all the time but i do sometimes but thats. and i don't live in an igloo if thats what your thinking because it really isn't all that cold here except some days in winter. so anyway good bye
tootles from:
~Hannah~
I love Harry Potter
Moe
2004-07-15 . chapter 6
I'm a new reader, and I love your story! Please add more soon!
Aimee
2004-06-13 . chapter 6
Wow! Get the next chapter out soon! I can't wait!

By the way, I think it's a great breath of fresh air to see Ginny in a different light. The "angel-Ginny" thing is so fake. She has to mess up some times.

Ok, I know you've probably heard this a million times, but it never hurts: You're a great writer! I think your story rocks, and I wouldn't change it.:D Good Job!
johanna
2004-06-12 . chapter 6
this is a great story! pls update soon!
hedi
2004-05-16 . chapter 3
hey,
i love your sotry i am enjoying so much and your style of writing is so great i love it plz continue the story or make a sequel to it it is just so ausum. i love it
continue!
line-a girl form denamrk
2003-09-18 . chapter 6
I like your story really much...
It's great...
And I think they are IC...
I can't wait to read another chapter...
and I will be so happy... if you email me when there's a new chapter :D
from Line-a girl from Denmark
=)
Hermione4eva1
2003-08-25 . chapter 6
Great but they're still to short..
Hermione4eva1
2003-08-25 . chapter 5
Hey I like it.. You just rush it too much and there aren't enough details. The chapters are kind of short but I like your style.. And Ginny liking Neville is kind of cute.. I wonder if he even likes her... Second I was under the impression that Hermione would want a girl to talk to.. Being with Ron and Harry all the time..
chicky
2003-06-21 . chapter 5
Good story but not long enough chapters. Ginni was a bit mean in this but then it wouldn't be a good fanfiction. I hope you will send more chapters and make them longer and more fluffy. Keep up the stories. Give us some good R/Hr fluff in the last chapters...cannot wait!
suszi
2003-06-21 . chapter 6
The story was okey, although I would have liked Ginni to have be with Harry but the Neville was okey I guess. If your stories could be longer, than you could put more stuff into it and the story would get more exciting. Overall it was good.
Laura
2003-05-18 . chapter 5
Wow! You're a really great writer!! I love the fic so far! It's really good! Good luck w/ the rest of it but I'm sure it will be just as good!!
Mary
2003-04-14 . chapter 6
I love your story! I especially likeyour "Poor Neville" theme! Keep on with the R/H
Fistful of Moondust
2003-02-11 . chapter 6
I haven't read your other fanfiction or anything, but I have read a lot of fanfic and I've got to tell you...YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!! I even loved the Ginny bashing part! I think those who were upset about it ought to bugger off (am now ducking from flying vegetables--please don't hate me)! Anyhow, I'm really looking forward to your next update...keep up the good writing (and really, it is). Oh, and I should add, I really like the plot and I can tell you've got a vivid imagination (and if you really don't--don't let me know, let me think that's how you are--lol)!!!
Fire Star
2003-02-10 . chapter 5
I think your story is great so far! I mean, if Ginny needs to be the way she is acting right now for the fic, that's fine! It's YOUR fic, not the reviewer's fic. I for one am going to keep reading.
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