One of the very first JL/J'onn stories I ever read, and it's still my favorite.

please be nice he's so cool!

I ADORED the mention of his...er...love for the Oreo. Not that I blame him, they're REALLY good...*munch, munch*

Siona

Great ending! I LOVED the part with the orbs! I really think your style improved as the story went along, and that made it all the more enjoyable. Wonderful job, and I hope to read more of you work!

Jaclyn

PS: And now...I am dying for some Oreos. Mh...

Words can not describe how well that last chapter pulled everything together.

This story has been highlights of my days since it started. I looked forward to a new chapter all the time, and eagerly waited, sometimes impatiently. And, you kept it up, great chapter after great chapter.

This was a great view how the oreos were introducded. Laughs from the Flash totally fitted him. Wonderful brother/sister moment bewteen the Martian Manhunter and Wonder Woman. And the last scenes bewteen him and Batman was spectacular.

This has been a great story! I enjoyed every moment of this!

Here's a question for the AR: How did this idea cross your mind?

YEAH! J'ONN WOKE UP! He's gonna be just fine! Whee!

I liked the little family thing. That was funny, especially with Flash being the annoying little brother, and Bats being the dad. I can SO see that! That was funny!

Where was Bats during this whole thing? Is he gonna be involved with whatever the others are planning to do for J'onn? What ARE they going to do, anyway? Huh? What are they doing?

Great job! Keep it up!

Still waiting for this great story to update.

THAT WAS TOO GOOD! Imagine what that wood b like if it was a show? Imagine how rich u'd b. If u don't write a sequel i'll find u and force u too(which is literally impossible cause i live in the Caribbean.)

R words _

Recognition

Restoration

Relevance

Rivalry

Rationalization

Rinsing

Remoteness

Rampance

Reception (need more?)

hoped it helped!(i never knew i knew all these words!I'm only 13!)

Alright! LOVED the ending. Glad to see J'onn back in form. I felt the style really improved as the story went along - I sometimes have trouble reading stuff on the computer.

So do us a favor and write a sequel!

Finally, JJ got the sleep he needed. No more nightmares!

WOW! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Is this the end? Oh, heavens, I want more. .

Siona

all I can say is WOW

I can't wait to see what happens next

more soon

please

Please write more! I am enjoying this!

Chapter seven was GREAT!

Hopefully J'onn recovers. Now that he realizes the truth, it would be so unfair if he doesn't recover!

Can't wait to read the rest! L8r Daiz!

What a wonderful story so far - I wish I had read some of this earlier! I love the setup, the plot movement, everything - and your characters are great, every single one of them.