 Sonar 8/23/09 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 Sita 1/27/01 . chapter 1Interesting, the way you brought in the use of the reality-distortion-dream thingy. Plus, the interactions betwenn AndrAIa and Matrix were quite good. |
 Alicia 12/14/00 . chapter 1 Very nice! You should write more Matrix/AndrAla fics. You're really good at them. |
 ben 11/18/00 . chapter 1 awesome story.! |
 Chiklee 11/15/00 . chapter 1 I agree! Keep writting M/A! |
 Andi 11/15/00 . chapter 1 Great story...very well writen, I loved it. You can really write Andy/Matrix stories well, keep it up. |
 Binome 74 11/14/00 . chapter 1 Great job! Keep writting! You can really do Matrix and AndrAIa well! Maybe you should write a fic about how they first got together... |