Reviews for The Fire When it Comes

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Kasienda 2008-01-29 ch 21,	abuseOkay, so I know its been years since you've worked on this but I just wanted to say I was impressed with the amount of time and energy (not to mention research) that you must have put into this. I'm such a diehard CT fan to this day! But I usually deny anything to do with Chrono Cross mostly because it seemed it was only around long enough to kill off all my favorite characters and didn't really bother to develop any new interesting ones (they just had too many). So thanks. I much enjoyed.
Burenda 2007-03-05 ch 21,	abuseThat was an absolutely awesome story, better than anything I have read in a very long time. I am in awe at your ability to write a story like this with such a complex plot that twines all the loose and unexplained threads and details from both of these games without descending into utter chaos or losing the reader to confusion. It WAS a little strange to see some of the decisions you made, such as Glenn becoming Serge, Magus being Lavos' son and becoming the Flame, and Zeal and FATE being the same person, but you managed to tell the story in such a logical way that I was able to accept your twists and turns. You even persuaded me to seriously consider things I hadn't ever considered before, such as a friendship between Glenn and Magus or a possible romance with Lucca and Magus. I loved the depth of character you gave to everyone, and I loved the fact that you even accounted for the feelings of Lavos and the Dragons. It really helped the story feel real. And last, I am glad to have a satisfactory ending to the story of Janus and Schala. Thank you so much for that, and for this story.
Legion 2004-04-03 ch 21,	abuseAn awesome story! I'm definatly NOT a CC fan and I thouroughly enjoyed the story. It was very well written and the twists and turns in the plot were well thought out and executed!
Cw Clark 2003-12-23 ch 21,	abuseOMG i have read your fic TWICE and have never review. Well the only thing i can is great job and you are a AWESOME author. THis was really inspiration i will kept i handy when i need to get the brain working again.
The Midgar Demon 2003-07-10 ch 21,	abuseWell, let's see here, where to start...Let's start by trying out a few words to describe this story. Epic, comes to mind. Mind-boggling seems appropriate as well. No, I take that back. Mind-warping is a much better one. By the stars, I don't know how people can write this stuff. I love time travel. I like to think that, for an amateur, I'm quite good at temporal mechanics. But this...! Frankly, my brain would be oozing out of my ears if I even tried to start something like this. I just don't have the necessary concentration to trace out such an intricate and detailed time loop. Amazing. Absolutely amazing. May your pens never run dry, may you always have a notebook (or five) on hand, and may your computer never lose power right in the middle of a story. I sincerely hope you apply your skill to other categories that I find interesting. Your contributions could be nothing but a good thing. Keep up the astounding work.
Darth 2003-05-06 ch 21, anon.	abuseMaybe you can make a story about Spekkio and his home and who he ended up being the god of war at the end of time. Also you clould also make a side story on how Queen eal the first letter of her name don't work on this keyboard and how she became fate after her death.
MistyOwl 2003-03-23 ch 21, anon.	abuseVery well done. Quite confusing as well but very well done. Must have taken you a long time to come up with it. It was great. So very very strange though... Again, very well done. Keep up the good work.
KC 2003-02-27 ch 21, anon.	abuseThat was good. As good as the two games and more. A very fine job done. :) KC
R.D 2003-02-21 ch 21,	abuseYes I simply adored this story! and it does explain the portrait in the end with Schala 'Kid' Zeal ^_^ Considering a Guile story eh? Now that Janus has the power to make himself another body, a Guile one-shoot story would be really cool. What it did really feel akward was the Schala and Kid merging, could there have been a way to keep Schala and Kid as individulas? or Kid as the dominant? (But if Kid took over, I know after that speech Janus gave and the forms he took a "Who the bloody hell are you?" would have been kind of hurtful eh?) But then again it was your story so eitheir way I loved it ^__^. I hope in the near future you write another CC/CT story! because I really enjoyed this bravo! Gives Kosagi a Golden award
skahducky 2003-02-21 ch 21,	abuseI'll say it again: this is the best Chrono Trigger - Chrono Cross story I've ever read. :) I love the ending.probably one of my two favorite parts. (the first being when Janus wouldn't change Glenn's eyes)
Yoseia Nasuka 2003-02-21 ch 21,	abuseYay~!! waves flags Go Kosagi! Go Janus! Kill Zeal. Oh wait, I'm on the wrong chapter. Go Serge! Go Janus! .you're updating too fast for me to catch up on reviewing, you know that? YAY!! The first kept in character Magus/Lucca! YAY!! I LOVE YOU!! =D Wait, wasn't Medina's demi-ppl equal if you defeated Ozzie? . I STILL LOVE YOU~!
R.D 2003-02-20 ch 19,	abuseBeautiful! Also which reminds me! When Serge and the two other characters you choose go up to the Flame, it depends of the leading character you have and how it will react (If you have oh let's say Guile, when I used him as my leading character and he went up to the flame he started backing away saying "No, I am not that!" which kind of got me thinking). The last we see of them Flame is before Time Devourer (1&2) I hope you don't plan to kill Janus (But still he can't be a flame forever or can he?). Whatever the ending is, I hope it's Happy ^_^
Lord Cirenmas 2003-02-20 ch 19, anon.	abuseGreat Story!
skahducky 2003-02-20 ch 19,	abuse[waves another your welcome flag at Kosagi] It's nice to know that you like it when I review. lol. This is probably the best Chrono Trigger - Chrono Cross story I've ever read. And thanks for chosing me as your beta-reader. Please update soon!
skahducky 2003-02-19 ch 18,	abuseYeah, not much to say. So.please update soon!

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