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| kitsune 2006-09-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really hope that you update soon! |
| Anatsu 2006-01-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseReminds me of Saiyuki Reload episode 7. |
| Kiharu Aroukii 2004-12-12 ch 3, | abuseCute! Ayan is adorable! I hope you update soon! |
| Utsukushi-Mayonaka 2004-06-04 ch 3, | abuseSomehow I felt stuck and then great relieve (Sigh…). I was really worried for a minute there that Ayan might not get back! Yay, Sanzo’s starting to be nicer to lil’ Ayan-chan… though not for the most correct reasons that is… --; Hey, Silrayn, you are not abandoning your works are you? Most/All of your Weiss fic.s haven’t been updated since 2003! |
| Utsukushi-Mayonaka 2004-06-04 ch 2, | abuse*Uncle*? Gojyo saying him self as uncle?! That is mighty out of place.. (snicker)… Hahahahaha… Ahh! That was rich after episode goodness knows which that is. He SO sensitive about his age thing. I remembered in that episode, he face faulted, and turned blue and stiff when a little girl called him uncle. ^_^ Oh my goodness! (Or is it ‘badness’? --;) Ayan fainted!? I know you say he’s allergic to smoke but THAT bad? Poor thing, Sanzo’s a mean type of person and all that too. Kits’ like to play after all, they *are* children but ‘corrupted monk’ won’t understand that… --; [Feeling dizzy] Oh no, Hakuryu no! [Groans] Aiee! Jealous pets are worrying… Anyways, [Grins] where do I find this ‘Training Your Humans To Behave’? [Looks at Silrayn with interest in eyes] |
| Utsukushi-Mayonaka 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseAww… Ayan-chan is separated from Brad but what about Luren? Won’t Luren be worried about his cute little son in a strange dimension where youkais live? That’s a different worry though; I didn’t think Hakuryu would be jealous and be nasty to Ayan. He even attacked him! Silrayn won’t let little Ayan suffer too much damage ne? |
| pixy 2004-04-21 ch 3, | abusewow! i love this story! i love all your stories and hope you write more...but mostly i hope you finish all your WIP ficcies cuz i love them. hm if we're gonna go by eye color and stuff, then i'd say that sanzo is in fact Ran's brother :) i also hope u continue to write your ran is kurama brother fics...also your other saiyuki fics as well cuz i love that anime also. |
| Dark Ryu 2004-03-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseSanzo is getting friendlier, that is for sure. Gramatically, you have a problem with particals -missing bits and pieces in a sentence-. Hm It's interesting that Hakuryu could be so protective of his master though. All in all a VERY interesting fiction!=) Hope to hear/read more! =) |
| Nightwings 2003-05-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseWAI! This is so adorable... seriously one of my fav ficcies. I come back and check all the time. Too bad you don't update too often (no, that's not a hint, but it would be nice...). *lol* Hopefully more soon! Love Ayan-chan~! |
| Evolvana 2003-05-21 ch 3, | abuseYeah! that fanfic was so cute! ^^ and I think Hakkai and Sanzô get very well together... that's true, Hakkai seems to be the only one who can really understand Sanzô's feelings... and Sanzô can talk to Hakkai about evreything... so cute ^^ go on like that ^^ |
| Fall 2003-05-21 ch 3, | abuse"It was a good thing that they were both males and couldn't have children. Sanzo would be jealous of the kids all the time." I loved that line. Sanzo and his hidden agendas ^_~ No wonder he struggles to kill his nicer side... Can't wait for the next installment. |
| Kyra2 2003-05-17 ch 3, | abuseThat was adorable. Sanzo is actually starting to get rather fond of the little troublemaker. I am curious as to why he can't change back but I'm sure you will tell us eventually. |
| Silver IceWind 2003-05-17 ch 3, | abuseSquee! You updated this! ^_^ Aw... now if only Brad was there *coughs* ^^; Excellent chapter, I just adore Ran-kit. And Sanzo's softening! ...sorta anyway. Hehe, excellent job, update when you can. IceWind |
| real-circus 2003-05-14 ch 3, | abuseaw...Sanzo really does have a soft fpot for that fur ball ^^ im so jealous...hah! juz kiddin...this fic's real neat! keep it up! |
| real-circus 2003-05-14 ch 2, | abusethank gods u updated! i came across this fic before i had an account i think...don't think i reviewed before...but u updated and that made my day, man! nice fic! poor sanzo... |