This story is so interesting and I'm dying to know what's happening so please keep updating. I like the fact that there is a lot of foreshadowing, but it's very well written and suspensful.

Hey! This is good! Are you going to continue it? Please do!!

very good i like it just as much as i did the other one! keep updating!

~lady-knight~

Wow, great story! I can't wait to find out what happens :) It has changed so much since I last looked at it-I've been reading your stuff for quite a while actually. You really have a talent for writing, and I can't put my finger on it but for some reason this story has me hooked! Keep it up, becuase I can't wait to find out what happens!

(Sorry I'm not a more helpful reviewer, but I really don't think I have any suggestions for this story!)

wow! this is better than the original. keep up the good work. sorry it took me soooo long. i've been procrastinating

Peter McGregor? must be related to either Ewan or just come up w/ cause if it is cause of Ewan McGregor then hey, he's related to me. but i love this and i love this part:

'There, in the moonlight, I fell in love with Legolas Greenleaf. My fairy tale had taken quite a turn. My prince turned out to be a commoner and my love was a true prince, Prince Legolas Greenleaf.'

this is how i always dreamed my lofe would be, but it never will be. and you should really continue SOON