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Elusive Horizon
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
Hehehehe.. This line cracked me up.

" Hermione's wardrobe had bi-polar disorder. "
anettemargarete
2007-05-24 . chapter 7
thank you, such a great story hidden in all the usual ffnet drivel.

thanks

anette (just your normal bellydancer)
leigh brown
2006-11-16 . chapter 7
that story was brilliant , you certainly inspired me to take up belly dancing! it was such a good storyline , i thoroughly enjoyed reading it , any chance of a sequel?? , i would like to give you some constructive critisism but i cant really think of any it was such a great story although perhaps , you could have made snape a little more of his nasty sarcastic self , it sort of builds up tension and makes him more sexy , hope this helps x
otherside2
2006-11-16 . chapter 7
amazing, funny, and interesting story. I couldn't stop laughing, loved the x-files mentions, Bronte sisters parody, the anitics of the next door neighbors, and everything in between. Thank you for sharing, and I do indeed want to try out belly dancing now!
Popkin16
2006-11-15 . chapter 7
Amazing job! I haven't laughed so hard in quite awhile. I think I laughed the hardest when Hermione and Snape were preparing to have sex and you kept switching to Carmel's room. It was hilarious hearing things from their POV!

I would love to try and belly dance, but I haven't the body for it. It just wouldn't look right on me. But that's okay :D

So you belly dance? Your author's notes made it sound that way. If you don't, how do you know so much? I kept trying to picture a hip drop, and I just can't.

Still, this story is amazing, and it's one I'll re-read whenever I'm in the mood for something funny and sweet. Amazing job!
KarenDetroit
2006-11-15 . chapter 7
Thank you for a very creative and amusing story.
KarenDetroit
2006-11-15 . chapter 2
I had to stop and run to the bathroom in the middle of this chapter, I was laughing so hard. What could you possibly invent next?
KarenDetroit
2006-11-15 . chapter 1
This has gone from novelly eccentric to patently absurd in one chapter. I can't wait to see what the next one contains!
Megan Consoer
2006-09-25 . chapter 7
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Athena
2006-06-02 . chapter 2
Absolutely hilarious! I loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it!! (you get the point). Great story.
Aussie Trebs
2006-04-14 . chapter 1
ha ha i liked that :) funny and well writen
carsonsheir
2006-03-09 . chapter 7
what a ** great story... i mean it had my holding my sides i was laughing so hard... i love it absolutly perfect. A real winner
Evenstar10
2006-02-17 . chapter 7
Love it love it love it. I just started bellydancing, and I hope someday I get as good as Hermione. (Shoulder shimmies are killing me!)
Melanthios
2005-07-25 . chapter 7
Wow, I never thought my knowledge of belly dancing would come in handy for a harry potter story. I need to start taking classes again...

Thank you for reinspiring me in this. ^_^ I love belly-dancing, it's one of the only physical things I don't get self-conscious about.
luniepoo
2005-07-23 . chapter 7
That totally kicked **! Thumbs up on all your work! I'm too lazy to review it all, but it does severly kick bum!
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