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uptowngirl48 2008-04-16 . chapter 21
ooh I love it!!
Kitrin 2006-12-09 . chapter 55
Ok, I've absolutely loved your story thus far, but I'm starting to get worried that Samara's getting a little Mary-Sueish. It wasn't too bad before but now having her related to Voldemort? I don't know. But I really do like what you have going here and I will definitely continue reading!
Danielle 2005-08-07 . chapter 2
I'm not sure what I think of two new students who just happen to be coming to Hogwarts for the first time in their 5th year, but I'm only on chapter 2, so I'm sure I'll love it as I keep reading. It's great so far!
Danielle 2005-08-07 . chapter 1
It sounds awesome! I can't wait to keep reading it.
RBlack 2005-07-30 . chapter 5
well ya kept me reading past the first chapter thats good lets see whats up next.
R.C.C. 2005-07-28 . chapter 50
"A/N: selections of Voldemort’s speeches were adapted from copies of Adolf Hitler’s speeches—obviously, there were drastic changes made, but some of the ideas were a spring board for Voldemort’s speeches" I thought those sounded familiar! I was going to say exactly how much it sounded like Hitler: so charismatic, but so evil. It was easy to see how he convinced his followers. This chapter was amazing. I found myself holding my breath. You've made Voldemort an astounding villain, his speeches driving and frightening. It takes a lot to get me to actually click the button and review. I also know that this story is completed, even though I haven't finished it yet, I just wanted document this reaction of mine, and congratulate you on a powerful chapter.
Tamora Pierce 2005-07-07 . chapter 4
I love the twins
Tamora Pierce 2005-07-07 . chapter 3
Strange sorting.
Tamora Pierce 2005-07-07 . chapter 2
Are you sure that no one died on the train?
ps. I'm getting you to 10 reviews like you asked in April.
Tamora Pierce 2005-07-07 . chapter 1
I think I will read this story
Herentas, too lazy to login 2005-05-24 . chapter 1
Hi! i'm just stopping by to tell you I'll begin to translate ABB in these days. tell you more the next time we meet on Yahoo.

Rose, la Reine Mauvaise
Josephino 2005-04-21 . chapter 31
im really loving your story so far! reading at least 5 chapters at a time is a little hard but i cant stand to stop. i think that a beta thingy would be good for you though, im seeing lots of mistakes especially with the speech. also some mispelled words:
Zambini Zabini
Oblivate Obliviate
St. Mongos St Mungo’s
Gringorts Gringotts
Hippogrift Hippogriff
Hedgewig Hedwig
Quiddich Quidditch
Orks Orcs
Beaubaton Beauxbaxtons
Drumstrang Durmstrang
Dementers Dementors
Askaban Azkaban
Angimi Animagi
if you need one email me and id be happy to assist! so far im only up to ch 32 so i might need some time to catch up but im here for ya! (pinkypoo_smellyboo@) keep on your excellent story :D
Virginia Riddle-Malfoy 2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Hey! I added a link to this on my yahoo group for Harry and Ginny slytherin storys, or dark Gin and Harry. It's Slytherin_Harry and if you don't want me to have it there let me know and I'll take it down. If you like the idea (and the fact that you'll get more reviews) and want to join feel free! I would love to have you! I also added a picture from your yahoo group. If you want me to take that down let me know. I love this fic!
Virginia Riddle-Malfoy 2005-02-12 . chapter 60
"Yes, well, he wasn’t much of a parent to you, was he?" Voldemort ran one of his long fingers down the tear streaked side of Alvin face. "You may think of me as your father," said Voldemort graciously. "I am so proud of you!"

Oh gee, thanks Voldemort. I'm sure you'll be a much better Dad. What with the crucios, and the Avada Kadavras and torture. Thanks a bunch. ;)
Virginia Riddle-Malfoy 2005-02-11 . chapter 57
OH NO! THE WARDS!! THE ONLY THINGS SEPERATING THE DEATH EATERS AND THE STUDENTS! FIX THEM! PLEASE!
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