Reviews for The Difference

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Bambi Dear 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abusehee. wonderful :D :D loved it!! damn there shud be more.
The Mad Empty Shell 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseoh you made me turn insane X_X!
grimm018 2006-02-17 ch 1,	abuseyour story was...interesting. go jack/ralph fanfics! i thought everything was pretty kool, must see wat else you've written
Hahukum Konn 2005-11-13 ch 1,	abuseJack's desire for dominance in all respects seems to be mixed with his liking for Ralph. Makes for an interesting story here. I like this (even if it does make me shiver a bit at the elements of sadism in Jack's statements and actions).
Catherina 2005-08-26 ch 1,	abuseI love the whole twistedness of it. Of course I'm crazy and think bad guys should win occassionally. But the whole Jack just wanting Ralph probably for his body is fun. As well as everyone being insane. Its all around Incredible.
cinema lover 2005-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoved it!
Lisa 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseA whee bit disturbing, I know most people write Jack and Ralph slashs and I think they must all be bonkers. I know it's only fan fiction so they turn the characters characteristics a bit, but Jack is evil and even though this story was well written it would never be possible. Write something not slashy with your talents!
CuriousDreamWeaver 2004-10-05 ch 1,	abuseNice fic. I quite like your characterisation. I always thought the lot of them would go bloody stark raving bonkers after a while. I didn't like the ending of the book. It would have been much more interesting if they had stayed on the island. And I so reckon the whole thing was practically oozing slash! Well... pre-slash anyways, considering their age. Well done! ^_~ DreamWeaver
Dark Angel Katti 2004-05-01 ch 1,	abuseI loved this; it was well written, well described, and I could feel the characters come through strongly. I only wish, as with your other (well written :)) Lord of the flies Fanfic that there was more of it!
BoySexWriter 2003-12-08 ch 1,	abuseMore detail needed! Yay! Jack and Ralph forever and ever! Loved it!
Juniper James 2003-12-01 ch 1,	abusewow, encore! please?
AznEyes 2003-11-26 ch 1,	abuseThat was fairly interesting... It was ironic how Jack would be kissing Ralph one moment and then reveal his glee of torturing the latter the next moment. It was kind of sweet how Jack said he would protect Ralph from Roger. This fic was very well-written. Good job!
lethal paine 2003-11-17 ch 1,	abuseSome minor typos... but nothing skull cracking annoying... I suppose there's no pun intended there... aheh. Anywho, they were in character -for two years of insanity yeah. That was cool. I think it fit really well. And that pairing was so great. lol -Seiri
larph 2003-10-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseHow could you do this to Ralph? I have to admit that you got the characters right though and that sniff there would be gay sex in the tribe... but por ralph!
Miya 2003-08-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI suppose since I've commented on your other fics its only appropriate that I finish off here...I admit that, though a good fic by anyones standards, this wasn't one of your crowning glories...I was actually a bit dissapointed (which simply comes from someone who wishes to see the best out of the fic that I love...knowing the writer can do better) that you didn't seem - though you only know - to stay true to the original characters of Ralph/Jack. Your writing style, as always, is wonderful on a good note...so keep up as you were with your other fics...believe me when I say I would never criticize, yet you asked at the end of your fic...thus I felt obligated as one writer to another. Anyway...as I ramble on - I enjoy all your work...keep up your love of writing! By the way...have you done any other works...or are planning on writing on anything else soon? Just very interested...^_^

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