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| Tavern Wench 2002-05-05 ch 1, | abuseAwww this is so cute you should totally write a sequel ^.^ |
| anonymous31 2001-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAuthor should live and write more Jyori! ^.^ Sorry about the excess of typos in all of my reviews, by the way. I needed lots of nice fluffy sap after reading some of your angsty fic. I don't know what you'd write a sequel about...but if you ever get inspired to write one, so much later, I'd read it. Yes, I'm a horrible slash/shounen-ai/shoujo-ai addict. It *is* hard to read a sappy story more than once, though...especially if you wrote it. The story was lovely, sweet, and lovely and sweet and cute... And Iori commenting on the story was very cute. ^.^ |
| Princess Of Quake 2001-06-23 ch 1, | abuse*sobs* AWWW!!!!!!!! CUTE!!!!!!!! |
| Aisu Aisu 2001-02-25 ch 1, | abuseKawaii!! Very kawaii!! I love Jyori!!! ^.^ It was so sweet.. And cute... Just a nice story... Sequel? Yes, please! |
| tune youg 2001-02-07 ch 1, | abuseOhhh, I loved this. I never thought of them as a couple before I read this, but now I really like it. ^_^. Yes, I think you should write a sequel. *grin grin* |
| shimmercat 2000-11-24 ch 1, | abuseAwwwwwww..... I love Jyori! Of course, I love any couple with Jyou in it, but Jyori is near the top of the list, maybe third... So cute. *sniff!* |
| Kat-chan 2000-11-16 ch 1, | abuse*deliberately ignores the moronic, juvenile flamer that is Reader, and the annoyance that is his/her inability to spell* Kyra! I thought this was so sweet! Really, it was. I'm not the biggest yaoi fan, but I know what I like. And I liked this. So *there* to the detracters. Besides, if it's an Iori fic that you wrote, chances are, it'll be great. |
| Ishida Takeru 2000-11-15 ch 1, | abuseEeeee. ::drowns in fluff:: Me like though. Love has no boundries! |
| marian 2000-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse*stunned* Aladdin...in-in..digimon?...0_0!!!! Ah, but it's okay. That was super kawaii and had 2 of the cutest characters!! ^_^ hee hee! .....hm, Jyou...17...*pounce* RWAR!! ^^;; |
| Seiitsu! 2000-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse^^ THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY SWEET! lol, but they were what? 17 and 11? Not that it COULDN'T happen... (of course my 16 year old friend went on a rant when i suggested something about him and kari... heehee, he said he wasn't a pedifile...) But very, VERY cute! Now... ::growls:: DON'T YOU HAVE A GEM WARRIORS FICCY TO WRITE??! ::shoves a laptop in front of kyra:: NOW GET TO IT! (excuse me, i have to go watch the grinch now... for the third time this week.) -Seii- |
| Katt Monroe 2000-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseSaa. ^_^ Sappy, much, but I loved it. Very cute. ^_^ |
| AniDragon 2000-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseKawaii! Hehe! Man, why is it that EVERY time I see a yaoi/yuri fic with... wuite an odd couple... I think, "There is no WAY that would work" and I READ the fic and think that it's incredibly kawaii? Kami! I'm pathetic... Anyway, this was kawaii! Also, could you please participate in the contest I'm holding? I have to post an update for it 'cause I forgot to mention a couple things... like the prize, a few of the rules, one of the catagories, etc.... ANYWAY! I'll try to write my Iori fic soon, but PLEASE participate! If you don't know a thing about Dragonball GT, just e-mail me and I can send you pics, descriptions, family trees... You ask for it, I can probably give it. Just PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASE participate in my contest and I promiss to hurry with my Iori fic! But please understand that I'm in tenth grade and that I have a strict frensh teacher, so it may take me a while. Um, anyway, back to your fic. KAWAII!!! Very well done! Congrats on yet another great yaoi! |
| Cybra 2000-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse:::giggles::: Teehee!!! It was kawaii! The ending section wasn't bad either... ~Cybra |
| Cynthia2 2000-11-15 ch 1, | abuseRather sweet fic. :) Hmm, Jyou and Iori...not my first thought for a couple, but it has potential. |
| Genevieve 2000-11-15 ch 1, | abuseDon't you you think of dying Kyra you hear me?! You just too good! It was really good, but just age by two years still makes Iori 11 and Joe 17.... But who cares right? Even I ignore the age. I mean putting Joe 16 and Izzy 10.... Anyways, not here to talk about me.^_^;;;; . Really great job Kyra. Would be nice to see a sequel too. Don't see much Jyori. Hehe, who knows, maybe you'll start a new style.... Well bye bye! -Geneviève |