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| A. Nonymous III, esq 2004-09-10 ch 1,  | abuse-_-; Sorry to say, but the grammar hurt my head...A LOT. Such a lack of punctuation...But I'm happy to see the characters weren't as warped out of proportion like I do to them. (Heheh. It's fun that way.) The story started off pretty well, and there isn't too much drama...And I did like what Tifa said at the end. Very characteristic (And HOW many times did she say "be strong" in the game?). But I do have to say one little thing...Stephen, with the same muscles as Sephiroth? (*coughyouwishcough!*) ^^; Hey, you're good looking, but not THAT good looking...I'll be reading more. |
| Shadow-Burst 2004-08-05 ch 11, | abusedamn! i didnt notice that ch 12 was the last one you done! dude keep writing, and scratch what i said at ch 12 (other than the 'you kick **, keep writing' part) keep writing man! |
| Shadow-Burst 2004-08-05 ch 12, | abusedude! im sorry i didnt catch this story when you were making it, cause i love the hell out of it. if i were here to catch it in the making, you wouldnt think no one was even reading it. i love this story man |
| Shadow-Burst 2004-08-05 ch 10, | abuse^_^ im loving this story muches, you are great. even though this story is a little old i think, i still like it |
| Shadow-Burst 2004-08-02 ch 3, | abuseromance you do good ^_^ i like this story oodles lol but ive said that before |
| Shadow-Burst 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abusei like it Oodles so far. a couple of errors but i can understand it perfect. i love it :D |
| UltimaGirl 2003-08-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseWrite more! ::throws apple at head:: WRITE MORE! TYPE MORE! Whatever.. it's good! You have *43* now *44* reviews unless I can't count which is a major possibility there too! ^.^;; |
| UltimaGirl 2003-07-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseUpdate soon! This is one of the best chapters..!! You just gotta wonder, who's gonna pop up next in this... |
| Ninja Girl Emi 2003-07-29 ch 10, | abuseEmi: Yay, ya updated! And it was good! ^_^ Troy: Yeah, that Stephen was a badass! EMi: I can't to read More! Troy: You'll have to wait! Emi: Aww, i guess I shall wait. But hurry! |
| Ninja Girl Emi 2003-05-03 ch 9, | abuseEmi: Nice chapter, stephen. I liked it alot. Troy: Yeah,it's becoming very good. Emi: I'll say, but please if you want me to update, you got to update yourself as well. Troy: Yeah, you haven't updated since March as well. Emi: anyway, keep it up and do what you must. Bye |
| thesaxmaster 2003-04-24 ch 9, | abusegood stuff keep it going! |
| Vanna Rauko 2003-04-18 ch 2, | abusesephiroth rules! |
| Vanna Rauko 2003-04-17 ch 1, | abusehiya kwel fic sephiroth rules! |
| thesaxmaster 2003-04-17 ch 2, | abuseWhat I've read so far is great. I will read the rest later but I can't wait! Please r&r mine! |
| cids turtle(now a little ha... 2003-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo, you think I have self esteem issues. I probably do. I just act that way at times, normally I'm a normal person. I just thought I should tell u that sense U THINK I HAVE SELF ESTEEM ISSUES! ~Read clouds insanity by cids turtle becasue it is just messed up |