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A. Nonymous III, esq
2004-09-10
ch 1,
abuse-_-; Sorry to say, but the grammar hurt my head...A LOT. Such a lack of punctuation...But I'm happy to see the characters weren't as warped out of proportion like I do to them. (Heheh. It's fun that way.) The story started off pretty well, and there isn't too much drama...And I did like what Tifa said at the end. Very characteristic (And HOW many times did she say "be strong" in the game?). But I do have to say one little thing...Stephen, with the same muscles as Sephiroth? (*coughyouwishcough!*) ^^; Hey, you're good looking, but not THAT good looking...I'll be reading more.
Shadow-Burst
2004-08-05
ch 11,
abusedamn! i didnt notice that ch 12 was the last one you done! dude keep writing, and scratch what i said at ch 12 (other than the 'you kick **, keep writing' part) keep writing man!
Shadow-Burst
2004-08-05
ch 12,
abusedude! im sorry i didnt catch this story when you were making it, cause i love the hell out of it. if i were here to catch it in the making, you wouldnt think no one was even reading it. i love this story man
Shadow-Burst
2004-08-05
ch 10,
abuse^_^ im loving this story muches, you are great. even though this story is a little old i think, i still like it
Shadow-Burst
2004-08-02
ch 3,
abuseromance you do good ^_^ i like this story oodles lol but ive said that before
Shadow-Burst
2004-08-02
ch 1,
abusei like it Oodles so far. a couple of errors but i can understand it perfect. i love it :D
UltimaGirl
2003-08-25
ch 10, anon.
abuseWrite more! ::throws apple at head:: WRITE MORE! TYPE MORE! Whatever.. it's good! You have *43* now *44* reviews unless I can't count which is a major possibility there too! ^.^;;
UltimaGirl
2003-07-29
ch 10, anon.
abuseUpdate soon! This is one of the best chapters..!! You just gotta wonder, who's gonna pop up next in this...
Ninja Girl Emi
2003-07-29
ch 10,
abuseEmi: Yay, ya updated! And it was good! ^_^

Troy: Yeah, that Stephen was a badass!

EMi: I can't to read More!

Troy: You'll have to wait!

Emi: Aww, i guess I shall wait. But hurry!
Ninja Girl Emi
2003-05-03
ch 9,
abuseEmi: Nice chapter, stephen. I liked it alot.

Troy: Yeah,it's becoming very good.


Emi: I'll say, but please if you want me to update, you got to update yourself as well.

Troy: Yeah, you haven't updated since March as well.

Emi: anyway, keep it up and do what you must. Bye
thesaxmaster
2003-04-24
ch 9,
abusegood stuff keep it going!
Vanna Rauko
2003-04-18
ch 2,
abusesephiroth rules!
Vanna Rauko
2003-04-17
ch 1,
abusehiya kwel fic sephiroth rules!
thesaxmaster
2003-04-17
ch 2,
abuseWhat I've read so far is great. I will read the rest later but I can't wait! Please r&r mine!
cids turtle(now a little ha...
2003-03-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo, you think I have self esteem issues. I probably do. I just act that way at times, normally I'm a normal person. I just thought I should tell u that sense U THINK I HAVE SELF ESTEEM ISSUES!

~Read clouds insanity by cids turtle becasue it is just messed up
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