Once again, very sad. You must hate life. I'm kidding, it was very good. Now I need to go read a happy gohan/videl fic to pick me up lol.

I thoughht that this story is sad and warmful to the heart. this story grabed my heart and I felt tears come down my face after every word that I read. You really out done your self. GOOD FOR YOU...

This sequel's so cute and it fits perfectly!

I think you should do another one.

Like maybe where Pan is all grown up with a husband and a kid or two where Gohan dies and is finally reunited with Videl.

Overall, great story! Keep up the great work!

it was a sad (sob) story.make another chapter k?

This was a very sad story. I am crying right now. She's my favorite character too. It was very beautifuly written, i never thought i would be so upset. I know it must be hard killing Videl, but u made this story so touching and sad. U really made it better by showing flashbacks of her and Gohan, it really made it more emotional. It showed how important she was to the story and it made her a more missed character than she would have been . Bravo.

That was so sad!
I'm cryin!
I've only ever cried when i read 1 fic
n dat was because i was partly listenin 2 sad music!
I HATE U! U MADE ME CRY!
I dont really...i just hate cryin
Makes u feel...weak
I've cried too much in my life...

Sad but very good. It was kinda sweet too.

Danichan667

you made me cry! i started thinking about life without MY mom... is it possible to die o separation anxiety? i probably would. i think it's nice how you didn't clutter the story up with all the other characters, too. good idea.

so sad!

hey. i really like it. do you think pan could grow up and for a b-day present for her dad she could wish her mom back to life. im not tryin to tell you what to do but i think thats a GREAT idea and some other people i know agre

luv

gohansgirl

AWESOME!WHAT DID GOHAN SAY?

Poor poor Gohan! I never knew what it was like to lose a loved one yet, do pets count? Well written and a wonderful job!

OMG that almost made me cry

waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

it would be so cool if she came back to life

but

your story

and it's so good that im going to let u off the hook

I LOVE IT

well i must get reading to other fics

read mine if ur ever bored

later

GD

Very nice. So sad but really sweet. Nice way of covering up the DragonBall thing. Keep em a comin.

C ya

Silvertress

So very sweet, but so sad at the same time...I loved the flashbacks Gohan had of Videl and his time spent together, the sweet part of the story. And it was sad when Pan asked what her mother was like...Poor Gohan having to explain that to her...Still, very good job Rachel. This is was beautifully written.

Night Sky