 Carolyn 6/1/01 . chapter 1 Don't stop writing! You're awesome! |
 Jalyn 12/11/00 . chapter 1 Same goes for this part as the first! Good idea and plot. just needs a bit of cleaning up in the technical aspects. |
 murdy 11/16/00 . chapter 1 next! Next! Next! |
 Baked Goldfish 11/15/00 . chapter 1Please don't leave us readers hangin. . . |
 gmb 11/15/00 . chapter 1 great story. too bad amy hates him though. well not really. but she almost made him cry. and that's not cool. n-e way great story, keep it up. ":) |