 BookWormVicky 2009-08-27 . chapter 14HI! Sorry I haven't reviewed before; fanfic has been having fits of moronicness and wouldn't let me, and I tried again now and it did! Very behind in that I've only just discovered this fic, but hey! Can't believe you woret this after only the 4th book, incredible! YAY! Very glad you said you liked babbling reviews, mine always are! AH! RON ADN HERMIONE ARE MORONS! I never would have thought Hermione would be that thick! Idiotic morons! Would Snape have been allowed to teach if he...liked young boys? NO. Would Dumbledore trust him? No. Ah! *sighs* I always end up having to write this: My annoyance with your characters is a VERY GOOD THING as it shows I care about them, and feel as though they are real. Anyway, when Harry looked at Sev in horror and we read that from Ron and Hermione's point of view, I thought they were going to jump to that conclusion, though I guess what other could they have made. Should be... interesting to see Harry defend Severus to them, I assume that's what he will do. I loved the snake! Such a great idea! Octavian, very cool name! I also loved Rowena, is it like Rowena Ravenclaw? Though I guess not as she wouldn't have said Harry was her master if it was her. Still, I bet she's a very special owl, to be able to talk to Harry, so cool! WOW! Silverhoof was also incredibly amazing! The description of her...I could see her clear as day in my mind, and have to agree with Harry; beautiful is not a good enough word. ANd the description of riding her...words fail me, she is SO COOL! I loved the way you had her talking to them, that was brilliant. LOL, Severus getting a tan was funny, can't really imagine him with a tan! Harry's reaction when he was about to open Fred and George's present was great, too. Well, the whole thing was amazing! I could rant on and on about the specific parts of it that I adored, but that would probably end up writing about all of them, LOL! The wet dog wet werewolf thing in the previous chapter (whichever previous chapter it was) I especially liked. Sirius' reaction to Harry and Sev's relationship...I am not looking forward to. With the OWLS, why wasn't he just healed? And I loved the idea of the maze, another of your more brilliant ones. Ha! Seri and Kit, unlucky! Going to stop ranting now and finish off this review. Your characters are so real, we feel every single thing they do. Your plotline in incredible, I adored the twist. the outcome should be... interesting. Just general adoration of your incredible talent, and now I must read on!
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 grangergirl-67679 2009-08-22 . chapter 19 So far the story great, but does the staffs have special powers. Also in a other ch., you wrote something about the golden phoenix staff, but not the other's.
I think you should.
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