New Chapter! (Although you're going to have to tell me when you update otherwise how am I going to know?!?) Anyway it looks great! Although you're still having a few issues with tense switching, but other than that it reads wonderfully! You’ve got some great descriptions going there as well! Although I’m a little squeimed with your battle scene, however brief it is :-) I’m a wimp when it comes to gore I know. Ooo and, 'Jumping up out of bed, he quickly dressed in speeds few mortal men can attain, a speed reserved for adrenaline pumped teenagers with more enthusiasm then a stadium of cheerleaders. ' I love that line!! And I'll say it again, I wouldn't want to meet up with that stadium of cheerleaders! You’ve really done a great job with the dialogue and inner thoughts, they come across as quite genuine! So far so good! I'm looking forward to seeing more, and of course you're going to have to tell me when you update!

Ooo! This is definitely well written, I really enjoy your thick detailing and very dense writing style. Fun! You really have a great knack for setting up both fics and scenes, you can really put the reader right there in the middle of your world! Very nice! Heehee, Ranma . . . Didn't see that coming :-P And Syaoran, and Belladandy, no surprises there, come to think of it I should have known at Hiro . . . No Love Hina? (Saw a commercial for their Christmas movie the other day and thought of you!) You just have a few instances of tense switching, other than that it reads very well! I'm really enjoying it, and as always look forward to reading more! (ie I'm going to pester you about this one O:-) ) Sorry it’s not as intelligent as it should be, but if you’re going to insist on posting at night then you’re just going to have to deal with my unintelligent reviews! :-P