I meant that you just have to keep adding more and I could´ve called it a collection of poems, but story was just shorter. lol
I liked this one a bit less, but it was still funny. Can´t wait till the next one.

Wow, such an interesting collection! I love them. Keep up the good...wait, no...great...nope...superbly excellent work (yes, that'll do)!
Thanks for a fun read,
Opal Flames

OOh, I like it.
You should definitely keep this story going, we all need a laugh.

oh, that´s hillarious. I love the ending.

NEATO! Heh, you need more humor that isn't pg-13.
I can't read those. anyways, I Like it!

great poems. how do you get words bold? or italic? i need to know. most of my stories i am writing atm need italics. thanx. i love the alliteration poem. very..ah...thingy. yea. anyway.

I like it. Loved the alliterations in the first poem, and the second one is just really *really* good. Being a devoted Slytherin I thought you were a tad unfair to them, what with the slimy and such, but it's well done so all is forgiven. Great work!

~Scroll Writer

Whee! Happiness is that you've finally posted these! Unfortunately I can't remember what I've already said about them :-D I love the alliteration! I think it's a great indication of your vocabulary that you were able to come up with such imaginative and coherent strings of words! And of course as I mentioned before I really enjoyed the second one! (Nice MP ref btw) I really like how it keeps the reader wondering until the end, or rather would if it weren't posted in the HP section :-D Anyway I can’t get my brain to work, so you’re going to have to deal with a brainless review. I really enjoyed both and hope to see more from you soon! :-D