it would seem outdated of me to say this but, i liked this vignette because you have portrayed the drama really well. the usage of simple words is very powerful and poignant. keep up. ^_^

^^ Sleepy..
man..almost 2..
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Aww..... that was sadd......
Your angst fics are really good, ya know ^^
Keep it up!!!!!!
Hehehehehehe....
-sLL

It was a litle PWP I suppose but I love it nonetheless... Everything seemed to define my own moment of utter stupidity. *sighs* On a more cheerful note, even though it was very short I think this is one of the best you've written. ^_^

T_T you made me want to cry~! *hugs* oh well... MITKO~!!! *kisses Lanie-san* yayy~!!! ^__^

Wahahahahaha!!!! I think it's rolling good! haha!

T____T Why have I not have a fic frm ya?

*watery eyes* awwwwh lanie!!! a xmas pressie!!! *huggles tight* sankies!! *sbos happily into lanie*

Wai!! kogure/mitsui!! +sighs dreamily+ any fic with mitsui and or kogure is good.... but yours was exceptionally so.. +sighs again+ Anyways.. i'm glad you made it oneshot.. that way i can feel Mitsui's feelings really really well! I hope to read more of your work in the future!